Reviews for Loss and Redemption
DarkHeart of Ice chapter 10 . 7/9/2004
Very tastefully done, and I agree with the last reviewer, please create a sequel. Or maybe doing something like this story, but maybe with a Kei/Su pairing. And if I may suggest a good Kei/Su pairing story to read, It would have to be "Child of the Crimson Moon" By . Of course you could take it in any way you choose. All in all, your story goes in my Favorite Story list.
NeverSayNeverEver chapter 1 . 7/8/2004
This is the best Fan Fiction I've ever read.

You have got to do a sequal! -Great Work
The Eromancer chapter 1 . 7/6/2004
This fic is much better on !
Damon Rhodes chapter 10 . 7/6/2004
Wonderfully done. I can't say that I've read a better Love Hina fan fic that keeps the characters IC and the plot line at a good pace. I really do hope you make a sequal, maybe like the next generation at the Hinata Apartments. I would love to see how this affects everyone else. Though...I like Evangelion also. I would love to see either! Great story, can't wait to see more from you.
Vermis Mysteriis chapter 10 . 7/4/2004
Wow. That was amazing. I'll be expecting such work from you in the future.
Barthoze chapter 1 . 7/4/2004
Great story
writer of the blaze chapter 10 . 6/30/2004
u know. that was pretty good, although i would have liked to see naru act on her anger and be punished for it.
Omni Angel chapter 10 . 6/30/2004
Excellent story. Kudos to you :). You did a great job telling the story and yes Quick Edit DOES blow. heheh good luck in future writings.
Silverlinedsnowflakes chapter 10 . 6/26/2004
AW! I LOVE this story! YaY! Go Motoko and Keitaro! Hooray! Hurrah! NiCe JoB!
TornadoReviewer chapter 8 . 6/25/2004
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Nanashi chapter 10 . 6/21/2004
Sequal, definatly must have a sequal
migele chapter 10 . 6/17/2004
Great story.

As i said on AFF not much to add.

only that lime is to much for certain chapters.
TornadoReviewer chapter 10 . 6/15/2004
KEITARO HAS CHOSEN MOTOKO!

YAHO!

I'm more than happy to read that!

As for the 'technical part' of the review:

One again I have to say this:great'emotional description' of the characters.

The last chapter is the true menaing of the drama/romance type of story.

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
sora chapter 1 . 6/12/2004
OVA OVA OVA OVA OVA OVA OVA OVA OVA!
Charles chapter 2 . 6/9/2004
Wow! That was so well written! Keep it up!
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