Reviews for Loss and Redemption
Barthoze chapter 1 . 7/4/2004
Great story
writer of the blaze chapter 10 . 6/30/2004
u know. that was pretty good, although i would have liked to see naru act on her anger and be punished for it.
Omni Angel chapter 10 . 6/30/2004
Excellent story. Kudos to you :). You did a great job telling the story and yes Quick Edit DOES blow. heheh good luck in future writings.
Silverlinedsnowflakes chapter 10 . 6/26/2004
AW! I LOVE this story! YaY! Go Motoko and Keitaro! Hooray! Hurrah! NiCe JoB!
TornadoReviewer chapter 8 . 6/25/2004
Nanashi chapter 10 . 6/21/2004
Sequal, definatly must have a sequal
migele chapter 10 . 6/17/2004
Great story.

As i said on AFF not much to add.

only that lime is to much for certain chapters.
TornadoReviewer chapter 10 . 6/15/2004


I'm more than happy to read that!

As for the 'technical part' of the review:

One again I have to say this:great'emotional description' of the characters.

The last chapter is the true menaing of the drama/romance type of story.

sora chapter 1 . 6/12/2004
Charles chapter 2 . 6/9/2004
Wow! That was so well written! Keep it up!
Destro1990 chapter 6 . 6/8/2004
OMG this is a great story... iust what i wanted i dont know if this story is current but i just wanted to review and say thank you for this awesom story.
Prince of Dragons chapter 10 . 6/8/2004
I read the story all at one and I must say, I really admire your work. Everything was perfectly balanced and well written.

I'll keep an eye out for your other stories.
Kevin Remley chapter 6 . 6/8/2004
good story
shibuyasamurai chapter 10 . 6/7/2004
awesome story kept me on the edge of my seat every second. Also your an incredeble writer vocab, grammer , spelling everything i won't be surprised if I see you making headlines as a renound author one day. The ending was a way. Are you sure this is complete...hehehe.
Random1377 chapter 10 . 6/7/2004
You know, every time I read a chapter of this story, I find myself opening MS Word to start a Love Hina fic of my own. You'll have to pre-read for me if I ever finish one, though, because you definitely know your stuff. This was an excellent ending to a really good fic, with lots of angst, a healthy shot of WAFF, and a nice, cozy little ending. Nicely done, my friend, nicely done indeed. I'll be looking forward to your next story. Don't make us wait TOO long, you really are an entertaining author.


P.S. Yes, QuickEdit blows. Hard. :(
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