Reviews for Loss and Redemption chapter 7 . 11/21/2010
Yay, go Mokoto! You get his sexy ass to your room, and have steamy love-makin'. :) chapter 6 . 11/21/2010
Awww... now, when is the lemon comin' in? chapter 5 . 11/21/2010
Gosh, lime is the heavy burden of sexual tension..! But that made me heart skip a beat a few times. ;) chapter 4 . 11/21/2010
This is such a great story. :) chapter 3 . 11/21/2010
kuma sutra, ohhh... damn. Nosebleed. Too much positions...
volosaraptor chapter 10 . 10/14/2010
This is a fantastic story have you thought about doing a second story. You know maybie about the time that motokos and keitaros child has been born if its a girl you could call her Akiko and if its a boy you could call him Tenchu. Just a thought I hope that you do keep up the great work and I look forwored to your next story
The Hendog chapter 10 . 9/24/2010
I love this story so much! Amazing work.

I'm a sucker for a Keitaro/Motoko story, and this may be the best I've ever read! Of course, 95% of the kei/moto stories have been left untoched for years. Still, awsome!

I'm going to look for this sequal you mentioned, so...


-The Hendog
The Hendog chapter 6 . 9/23/2010
This is great, just great! One of the best keitaro/Motoko fics i've ever seen so far, but I haven't finished yet so I can't comment on the ending.

Funny that I'm giving you rave a review after my comment in Breathless, but I have to give credit where it's due.

Love it, and I'll probably review again after finishing. Anyways, I want to get in another chapter before bed, so...


-The Hendog
CodelyokoFan23 chapter 8 . 6/28/2010
poor keitaro and excelent story
Rob chapter 10 . 6/21/2010
i dont know wat to say man. that was it. the story had me excitment from the begining. i didnt comment on the others cause i was to wrapped in the story but yo. keep it up i want to see more just good job alround keep up the good work. best of luck.
Mz340 chapter 10 . 4/28/2010
I kinda cried along the story that you wrote. Beyond Excellent i'll say.
Shizukaeif chapter 10 . 11/28/2009
How shall I compose my thoughts?

Obviously, mere words cannot always sufficiently express the soul, and yet we, as human beings, are limited to them.


There are those who write, and there are those who CAN write.

You, sir, are in the latter category, of which there is the minority instead of the majority.

It is an understatement to say that this fan work is merely, as some reviewers have put it, 'Awesome; great;' etc. Yet, how can I convey my thoughts? Alas...!

Your story is nothing short of 'damn near divine.' You somehow weaved these words into a captivating work, while undeniably becoming an idol in the eyes of fans all over the world. You stuck to the storyline, kept in character, wrote lengthy chapters, and did all to please us readers.

There was not one time in the story where we were confused about what you had written. There was not one time in the story where things had gotten boring and slow. There was not one freaking time where weren't practically affected by your story, where we could sympathize with the characters.

...I have written before.

...I had been confident of my (unsubmitted) writing as being among the best.

No longer. Now, I now strive to become as good as you.

As of 4:30 AM, Pacific Time, November the Twenty-Eighth, Two-Thousand and Nine, There are just over three-hundred reviews for this fanfiction. There should be over nine-hundred and fucking nine.
The two stars chapter 5 . 11/27/2009
Amazing, this story is among one of the best written works I have read in my life. Believe me, I have read many many pieces of writing before, but this one blows me away. You have an amazing talent Hawker, and I am truly astounded by the imagery you can conjure up and fire that you put into the written word.
T3Ko chapter 10 . 11/9/2009
Great story.

Beth Cyra chapter 1 . 10/15/2009
I know this story has been completed for years, but last night I found it and was completely gribbed by it. Although not planning on it when I first came to the LH section of Fan Fiction I feel in love with the Keitaro and Motoko pairing, so much so that I can't read them with anybody else. I only say this because I really didn't think I could grow to like them even more but your story did just that.

Several parts made me both feel for the characters as well as laugh at how things where going, it was also very awesome how you treated Shinobu's character. Well I guess I should stop rambling and just say that I really think this is one of the best stories I have read and I amm really grateful you sharedd it with us.
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