Reviews for Hayase
kayak chapter 5 . 9/26/2004
Excellent job! Very imaginative and your interpretation of Misa's parents and her early years are well thought out. I love filler stories like these. I always wondered about Claudia and Misa's first encounter and their first impression. And I especially wondered what Misa thought about Claudia's very tall boyfriend.
Joshua chapter 5 . 9/19/2004
Great chapter. Bring it on!
Admiral R.T chapter 5 . 9/18/2004
loved the chapter Shinto! I love the way you portray emotions with everyone.

Please update soon!
gppr chapter 5 . 9/17/2004
You convey Takashi's emotions so well. It is always a pleasure to read your work, SR. I loved the final scene of this chapter, when the father lets go of his little girl.
k71 chapter 5 . 9/17/2004
Great chapter. You certainly covered a lot of ground in a short chapter! I like the subtle way you show the Misa and her father's relationship. Keep up the good work.
Orla chapter 4 . 5/15/2004
Very interesting and emotional look into Misa's family background. It's great to see the hints dropped in Macross fleshed out and and given life. Great fic!
k71 chapter 4 . 5/9/2004
Very nicely done! Emotionally painful. The chapter wasn't long, but the emotion came through. Good job!
k71 chapter 4 . 5/9/2004
Very nicely done. So painful! The chapter wasn't long, but the emotion came through. Good job!
Admiral R.T chapter 4 . 5/8/2004
Loved the new chapter and the revisions! They were really good and sweet!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
gppr chapter 1 . 5/8/2004
It was great; so emotional and complex. I truly enjoyed reading it.
Joshua chapter 4 . 5/8/2004
A great chapter and good revision! And it's so sad. Waiting for next chapter. :)
Sphersian chapter 4 . 5/8/2004
Wow... what an amazing chapter, it was very intense and VERY well written. Great job! will we see another chapter? :)
Sphersian chapter 2 . 2/10/2004
good chapter! can't wait for the next one :)
k71 chapter 2 . 2/8/2004
OH NO! I DO know what's coming next! Very sweet chapter. I love the parts with Misa and Riber's early relationship. Also, the Hayase family is so cute! Hope to see the update soon.
k71 chapter 1 . 2/5/2004
Great job. I love the idea of a fic dealing with Misa's parents. Can't wait for the update!
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