Reviews for Exitus Acta Probat |
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![]() ![]() This chapter was truly hilarious I enjoyed reading it, the Tom Riddle Sr part especially. Thanks for writing it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you: as always, you made my day. druged Tom is the best Tom. And I would love to see him keeping muttering. After the meeting of the two Riddles and all the comments about their handsomness, I see in my head a shirtless wrestle between them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have calmed down now and still want them to smoosh. hahahaha. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ughh. okay still loving the story but going to rant on characters, no offense to the writing or anything here. But. I can't help that I'm getting so upset by Hermione's ridiculously unjust self-righteous bulls*t at this point. I kind of want Riddle to just die, so she has to suffer as a result of her selfish unattainable standards. is that terrible of me. Riddle has reduced himself to this laughable, embarrassing state, and I honestly cannot tell if Hermione will ever accept him, even after all the trials she put him through, the b*tch that she is being about this all. haha sorry just really, really upset with her right now... esp her lack of care if he lives or dies. She's in denial but goddamn she is so fucking stubborn I can't stand it. in ready to off Riddle just to spite her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() of course after I wrote the last Pomfrey has to drop a laundry list of horrible making me sound silly for backing the psychopath just because he's hot lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahh. honestly being this removed now from the horrible things Riddle had done at the beginning of the fic it feels like Hermione is being way too harsh. it's like how can you hear this sob story and not be a little bit sorry for his circumstances. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ahh it has been a while but I'm ready to catch up. reread the fondue wrestling just to get a good laugh in. The Blaise/Tom banter is still so good. This was another excellent chapter full of shenanigans. and my emotions went through a full gamut here. First off: Thank you for a kiss omg. YES! I'm on cloud 9 haha then when the whole love potion thing happened I couldn't stop laughing. Then it got all serious and loved his further confession.. since he has only professed his love like 8 times already but it was sweet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fleur was interesting but also a bit nutty lol poor Percy lol, and Kyle was really insightful, more so than Hermione with Fleur lol, I would have though Hermione would advocate communication between Fleur and Krum rather than ok Percy is a good listener and can learn to eat kitty with a book really well lol seemed a bit strange when Hermione could've given her an idea of how she can speak about how she felt to Krum first rather than just letting it end I wouldn't say it was irreconcilable differences in that case all he would have seen is her trying to get him to say her sister is prettier than her and end things when he refused to say it which most men will confirm they will always think that is a trap, if she sits down and says how she sees her sister to him and that it is offensive to her for anyone to not say she is more beautiful than her I'm sure he could find a way to appease her and compromise. Sorry for not picking but it just felt very random how she handled that even if she was distracted by the letters arriving, I did like the chapter but you made Stebbins look like a better therapist than her at the end |
![]() ![]() Wow, such a slow burn love it) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Stebbins really is an excellent apprentice and I’m glad Hermione was able to get a non biased (or as close as you can get to non biased considering the war effected everyone) perspective on her relationship with Tom and how they could potentially move forward |
![]() ![]() Love it, please write more) |
![]() ![]() Ooh Kyle! Excellent therapy work! |
![]() ![]() WTH. WHAT HAPPENS NEXT I NEED TO KNOW. THIS FIC HAS BEEN SO WILDLY ENTERTAINING IM OBSESSED AND IT WAS WRITTEN SO GOOD BUT MAN. MAN DOES HE DO THE THING AND LIVE PLEASE I NEED A HAPPY ENDING |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a good chapter, I liked the pacing and advancement |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've done to the conclusion the this fic has been written by someone completely stoned throughout, that's the only explanation I can think of because at times it is getting more and more ridiculous to be credible, it is a good read by the second everyone has started behaving completely irrational and like children or high on drugs the only explanation I can think of is the writer is high AF you are getting most people addicted to substances, or having rages or shirtless fights or assaulting children (Remus) it's just a bit over the top now :( |