Reviews for Exitus Acta Probat
fly chapter 9 . 5/11/2005
You updated YES. I love your story it's grest- but (there's always a but) plz try and update more often.
Cinammon chapter 9 . 5/11/2005
Finaly! I thought you'd never update!

I love this part of the story. And I think I'm falling in lust with Zabini's character. He is so se-e-exy. What with all the jealous rage and kissing of neck and knuckles...

And I like Millie more and more in this story. She's feisty! Adrian and Pucey are pretty great too and I love the Snape-teasing!

Though I'm not so sure how the story's going to turn out now that Hermione's going to the past, I promise to stick with it and find out. I decided I'm going to trust with where you're taking this, so please don't let me down.

I was really hoping Zabini would go with her to be honest. After all, there are several sets of male, period clothes somewhere around...

Can't wait to see what you've got planned next. Hurry up and update already!
El Ci Aech Johnson chapter 9 . 5/10/2005
That's a horrible cliff hanger! Thank you for the rewards though...

Anyway, excellent chapter, I quite like Hermione's innocence and blunt attitude about sex and sudduction, very in character. Blaise's character is once again quite realistic; like most teenage boys, he is a virgin, but when the chance finally comes around to have sex, he doesn't pass it up.

The poor Weasleys... Ginny being evil... what a horrid way to have to find out that you're youngest child and only daughter and sister is not only a Death Eater, but also Mrs. Voldemort. That would be so devestating.

Anyway, you can't make us wait like that again! Please update soon! (Just so long as it doesn't interfer with you're school work. -)


El Ci Aech Johnson
ReeferxMadness chapter 8 . 5/4/2005
Awesome story! You gotta tell me when the 9th chapter is up!
ReeferxMadness chapter 4 . 5/3/2005
Wow! What a great cliffhanger!
Blackpants chapter 8 . 4/11/2005
Cool story. although the chapters describing everyone's deaths...not fun.
Marauder no. Five chapter 8 . 4/7/2005
yay this is really good! don't give up.
roxythewriter chapter 8 . 4/2/2005
hello! I love your story please write more soon!
Ocean Reflection chapter 8 . 3/31/2005
Really elegant couple, aren't they? The Lestranges they mean. And Blaise and Herm are so cute together! I know I already said that, but the picture you're painting of them is just-makes me want to squeal! Lol, great chapter, keep up the good work, update soon, and have a longer chapter, please!
C4t3 chapter 7 . 3/22/2005
". . . their kids would have brillo heads . . ."

Hum . . . Very confused. what does that mean?
Luna-chan chapter 8 . 3/10/2005
Wow. Just one word. Wow...

I stumbled upon this fanfic only a few days ago, but read through it alarmingly fast. Your writing is just great! And the story wonderful (The riddle was perfect, the explenation of it in chapter 7 was even better. And I REALLY like the Blaise - Hermione twist. Damn, thanks to you I might actually like Blaise's character...)

Yes, I know this isn't critisism that is of much use to you, but I just wanted to let you know that people are appreciating you for writing a fic this great and spending all that time on those enormously long chapters (which is a good thing)

Anyway, good luck with the next chapter and all things you have to deal with in your off-line life!

Hope you update soon!
Cinammon chapter 8 . 3/9/2005
Wow! This story is just getting better and better! If only I could get you to update faster...
El Ci Aech Johnson chapter 8 . 3/8/2005
Yay! You up-dated! I love this story more and more with every chapter!

Usually I hate Bellatrix, but seeing as she was the one to send the diary to Harry... I think I may have developed an odd fondness of her. (I'm a Ginny hater...)

Anyway, I love the Blaise/Hermione scene, it was perfect! The best part was definitly Snapes reaction! It was so in-character and humorous! I can't wait to read more!

Please up date soon!


El Ci Aech Johnson
BrennaM chapter 8 . 3/8/2005
An excellant story! I really look forward to seeing what happens next.

Hermione and Blaise crack me up!
fly on the wall chapter 8 . 3/7/2005
It took ages but I'm glad you updated. It was a pretty good chapter but PLEASE update sooner.
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