Reviews for Exitus Acta Probat
Kou Shun'u chapter 1 . 11/23/2004
"Professor Lupin,... and would they like the chocolate he collected, as he was allergic?"

*agast* lupin allergic to chocolate and giving it up freely? certainly thats part of the joke yes?

i like how of all the weasleys left its only percy . it makes a certain kind of sence. plus i like him.

and i like how peter jumps in front of harry as i think he will. i dont beleive he is how many pep make him out to be.
Ocean Reflection chapter 6 . 11/18/2004
Now you have to update soon! I forgot half the story but I remember parts now! So UPDATE, I'll LOVE YOU SO MUCH if you do!
flea chapter 6 . 11/17/2004
Your story is great. In the darkest scariest moments of it you still inject humor into it-fantastic
TheDragonDancer chapter 6 . 11/17/2004
Um... excuse my unintelligent blabbering while I try and find out how to say this. This is... Definitely in the top five of al lthe fics I have read. (And I have read thousands) Well, that is, counting Cassie Claire's Draco Trilogy as one story... And then there is The God of the Lost by I cant remember who... I love the Riddle. And the tie to Tom *Riddle* being a sphinx. Brilliant. And... I can't really think of anything else to say. So, all I can really say is this is excellent, and keep going, and there better be and update soon. Within a month. Or I'll hunt you down. Or better yet, would you like a beta? Have you got a beta? I'll be one for you (For no other reason than I'd get all the juicey info before everyone else) XD Anyway. I'm trying to think of what else I liked... The fast pace kind of scared me. Or maybe I was just reading it fast, but I was so scared when the attacks were happening. I had to make myself stop and slow down because I kept skipping lines, haha. Okay okay, now that I have thoroughly wasted your time with these incessant ramblings of praise and amazement, I'll bid you good day and leave you be.

Kisses and Jests

The Dragon Dancer

Sorry, yet again, for such and ungodly amount of nonsense for a review.
Avery-Rose-Rain-Slytherin chapter 6 . 11/16/2004
Okay (look's other way) your doing really good. I like the plot so far. Keep going your dooing a good job. Please update soon
Lanhar chapter 6 . 11/11/2004
wow, what a intresting twist to the story, the way each house and dorm was hit, the bonding btwn the non de slytherins and the duo,

you wrtie the pple so well too, i cant wait for more.

bLOOMiEs69 chapter 6 . 11/7/2004
this is the most AMAZING story ive ever read. my mind is reeling... please please please... i cant wait for the next chapter! i have never been so excited over a fanfic before! haha well, good luck and hurry hurry hurry before i explode in anticipation!
Cinammon chapter 6 . 11/7/2004
That was incredible! The best fanfic I read in a while! Action-packed and fast-paced... what more could I ask for in a fic?

I feel strangely attracted to Zabini. Is that bad? The smart aleck comments and sharp wit had a lot to do with it. The whole ugg-me-caveman-ugg-grab-hermione-and-ugg-throw-over-shoulder thing was the clincher!

Lupin's and Harry's characters are wonderfully well developed and so is Hermione of course. Percy's changed. He's become... rather sexier too be honest. What can I say, I'm a sucker for sexual innuendos and teasing. Definately not cannon. Don't tell JKR, but I prefer him that way. Morag was quite the lovely surprise too. Very realistic. My sympathy lies most with the Hufflepuff boys and the Gryffindor girls. Poor Katie! Gotta love Millie and her Slytherinettes though! Girl Power in all its glory!

And Hermione gets to kick ass? Yipee! Honestly, there's nothing more I could ask for. I never did like Parvati much. Parvati Patil? Who's got a name like that? Padma Patil sounds only marginally better.

Ooh, you know what could make this story even better? Daily updates!

...but I'll settle for an update as soon as you can.
hi12 chapter 6 . 11/7/2004
This is a really great ff story! is this a Blaise/Hermione story?
shoplifterette chapter 6 . 10/26/2004
Oh what a great fic! I love it. Please continue soon!

lupusregina chapter 1 . 9/25/2004
whoa...very violent beginning...but it was still very good. but you did just kill off half of the best characters...
Acts of Tekla chapter 5 . 8/29/2004 good. The writing was action-packed and fast paced. Can't wait for an update!
girlthursday chapter 5 . 7/29/2004
Exciting fic, but I can see you haven't updated in three months now... Yeah, so update soon, becuase I just need more of your story!

Who knew Ginny was evil!
gothicneelam chapter 5 . 5/2/2004
I just re-read chapter 5 again. It just occurred
to me that I never gave you enough praise when I first read it!
So here it is: That chapter is the describes the best-blood bath ever! I could just imagine it all. Damn! F*ck would I have enjoyed to be part of that!
*Carries on day dreaming about the people she would love to kill.*
*cough* Ignore me, I’ve just had a bad week, and have made an enemy as well. Anyway you shouldn’t have to hear about my personal problems, I just want to say thanks for taking the time to write this chapter, it really is a beautiful blood bath. I would have took part in it and kill my enemy at the given opportunity .
Good chapter, I really loved it! I hope you update soon.
P.S Sorry for rambling and wasting your time.
Ocean Reflection chapter 5 . 4/21/2004
NO! Right when it got to the good part! That's SO NOT fair! Horrible blood bath, I like how you wrote it. With all the different times and stuff, and how you focused on the few minutes before the murderers stormed into the room. Poor Van de Houser though, the twin that was choked to death. I don't think he should've died. And first I was thinking that Padma was a death eater, too, like her sister, and I hope she's not. Cuz, you know, I was sort of resenting the fact that you made the Indian in there a murderer... cuz you know I'm Indo too. LoL, yea but anywayz, I'm wondering how Lupin could *not* have heard all the screaming or the heads of the houses cuz they have their rooms near the common rooms, I remember I was reading the books and McGonagall got all mad and came up in her nightie cuz they were making so much noise in the Gryffindor Tower. Oh and I love how at the end the Slytherins and Gryffindors get all together cuz they have to stop the murderers. And yea, that's the longest review I've written in the longest time. LoL, well update soon.
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