Reviews for Concrete Angel
cheygrl94 chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
That was an amazing story. Your very good. Unfortunately now i'm depressed. your words spoke to my hear though, so feel good about that.
Nightcrawlerlover chapter 1 . 10/17/2008
Several days later, Severus Snape stood alone in the cemetery, gazing at the small concrete angel that served as the marker for the girl’s grave. A hot tear glided down his pale face. The usually stoic man’s eyes were red from crying, his voice shaky and depressed.

“Why didn’t I ask her?” he whispered. “Why did I assume she was alright?”

The question went unanswered and he leaned down, placing a bundle of red roses next to the angel.

“I’m so sorry Hermione. I’m so sorry,” he repeated.

With one last sorrowful glance at the granite angel, he apparated away, sobbing.

Wow...!

(I'm glad that Hermione's parents never abused her in the books.)

Keep up your awesome writing!
IchigoXLawliet10 chapter 1 . 9/15/2008
:)
Midnight Callwel chapter 1 . 2/22/2008
Love it.
SennaFan4ever chapter 1 . 3/19/2007
Hey there! Lauren ehre. I hope you're doing well. I jsut read your HP Song fic story. It was great! Please write more!

Lauren
AlbinoMonkeyC chapter 1 . 10/1/2006
Sad, tragic, awsome
lilycarverjb chapter 1 . 6/8/2005
omg sad! i really really liked it but it could have been elaborated on a bit you know? but still great
Kagomebaka91 chapter 1 . 2/19/2005
Nice fic .i love that song! And the stor y fits really well. buti have just one quetion who was beating on her? anyways Great fic read one of mine somethime and review . byes
colorguardbaby23 chapter 1 . 6/18/2004
Winky! I liked it! Very depressing but very good! Was she being abused by her parents? Anyways very well written!
Dru619 chapter 1 . 6/11/2004
Hey Girly, I loved it!
Naruke chapter 1 . 4/12/2004
very good but i think you ended to soon like for the ending lryics you could have it go back on Professer snapes thoughts on how it ended or something like that
Jennifer chapter 1 . 2/8/2004
Geez, that's depressing. Wow...beautifully written on a very, very sad subject.
marilis chapter 1 . 2/1/2004
I absolutely luved this! great short story
weNdAlroW chapter 1 . 1/31/2004
OMG!THAT WAS SO GOOD i HAD CHILLS THE WHOLE TIME I READ IT! I ALMOST CRIED. IT WAS AWESOME!
Lilyangel04 chapter 1 . 1/31/2004
Hey I love that song I was just listen to it! Like you r story so keep writing!:)
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