Reviews for Married With Princess
Crimson Yrael chapter 3 . 8/22/2014
So disappointed. I came into this story thinking it was one of the rare Keitaro/Su matchups...only to find out it's one of the not-so-rare harem variety instead.
BlackPitbull chapter 6 . 8/20/2014
Guest chapter 6 . 8/1/2014
Hey forgive my abruptivness but its been six years since u last updated this story have u stopped workin on it i hope not it is a fantastic story and it needs to be finished i hope to c an update done to it soon its been too long
Tig3rzhark chapter 6 . 3/28/2014
Kitsune is one lucky fox to bed Keitaro first. Of course, she's the most sexually aggressive women in Love Hina.

Suggestions: I hope that if possible, should the story be continued, that in time, that Motoko and Naru's aggression against Keitaro over time can be toned down a little, or it could be possible that one of the other people in the cluster marriage can have them tied up and Keitaro can perform retaliatory sex to get back at the times that they have assaulted him.

I really have to give you credit for having both Haruka and Kitsune take initiative when it came to getting Keitaro into the bed.

Please keep the story going.
Tig3rzhark chapter 3 . 3/27/2014
Wonderful! Absolutely Wonderful! I'm sure it's been a while since your last update, but please return and update this story. This is how Love Hina should have ended in the first place.
anonomous chapter 6 . 11/22/2013
it was great you should make more
Maxmanatarms chapter 6 . 7/19/2013
I like how you got the story taking its step from one point to another cant wait for more.
Jess D chapter 6 . 2/27/2013
This is a pretty decently thoughtout and incredibly well written story. If you ever do consider writing fanfiction again, I do hope you work on this one when you find time. Or, that is, if you still want to write anime based fanfiction, or Love Hina stories again. You are one heck of a writer, I do hope you decide to write again.
volosaraptor chapter 6 . 7/21/2011
Fantastic story i really carnt wait for the next chaptor when will it be comin out plz send a reply on my account to let me know if u are finishin the story or if it has been discontinted thanxs for your time keep up the fantastic work
ariel stormcloud chapter 6 . 2/11/2011
great story
WMWConquerer chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
Dear Mr. Talon,

Is this story up for adoption? I feel that I could add some good content to it if you no longer want to work on it...

Sincerely Your Humble Literary Admirer,

mentalkid chapter 6 . 1/27/2010
lol this is great! too bad its not been updated in a while. well, if you ever have the chance, please update soon! I wonder if age has anything to do with the marriage cos imagine if a woman with a kid had been living in the hotel, would the kid be married to him too?
SecondSeraphim chapter 6 . 12/21/2009
Please come back to this story soon.
revolution chapter 6 . 12/8/2009
oi! continuation?
T3Ko chapter 2 . 11/2/2009
Poor Keitaro. You seems to get in to promblems without trying.

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