Reviews for Our Moment
SJlikeslists chapter 1 . 5/19/2015
This whole piece feels like cloud watching - laid back, restful, and just allowing things to soak into your soul. There are a few editing issues that could be addressed. I enjoyed the fact that you let him voice (to himself) some of the thoughts about darkness that we glimpse in him from time to time, then you allowed them to just sort of float away - dispersed by the concept of how he feels about her and the two of them together.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
so. . . FUCKING...CUTE!
cratbro chapter 1 . 12/28/2011
Holy cheeseweasles... this was a delightful surprise! Beautiful lines.
xxundertheradarxx chapter 1 . 9/14/2011
So Kawaii! Naruto you big romantic! :3
Uzumakiluver chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
Wow... That is the cutest one-shot of should I say story I've EVER read!
kibagaaralover18 chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
I love the fluffiness! It's so sweet and poetic.
Jasane-chan chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
Aaahhh So fluffyyyyy Me luvs this much - ! Very well written.
LizaUzumaki chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
AW that's really cute 3
Stickstrike chapter 1 . 12/21/2009
really good, but fix up some of the sentences in the beginning. Naruto's character isn't like that! in terms of thinking, as well, USE CONTRACTIONS! it was chunky and not flowing. fix those mistakes, and you will have a much better story.
AirKing chapter 1 . 3/2/2009
that was really nice and very poetic. You were really able to capture Naruto's feelings in that story.
Twylyte chapter 1 . 12/13/2008
That was so cute! Very fluffy! It made me smile.
Anzer'ke chapter 1 . 10/11/2007
nice work!
braindamage730 chapter 1 . 10/1/2007
great story
SHADOWasianMAN chapter 1 . 5/25/2007
Wow. Now that's a nice story. Great job!
xo4evagurlox chapter 1 . 4/10/2007
AW! SO KAWAII!
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