Reviews for Dungeon Keeper?
Spellspinner777 chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
Tre's Cool Dude. I take it now that ur li'l bro is 15?

Well he should keep writin cos he is good at it. lol.

seriously.

Just need to remember paragraphing and grammar.

other than that

DEVILISHLY GOOD

(ALTHOUGH WHY KILL THE WICCAN? T_T)

.~ (happy devil. lol)

Have a cookie
Conahan chapter 1 . 11/23/2005
OMG try and Paragraph... even if it is not yours... This sets me off... and I didn't read it...
582017 chapter 1 . 5/1/2004
Have you not heard of grammar and paragraphs
Me
P.S Use a spellchecker more often
Ryan chapter 1 . 4/9/2004
This story was bloody good.
1233122313441224142 chapter 1 . 3/16/2004
Great story! Tell your brother to keep writing! I espeacially liked the "They all lived unhappily ever after" part
-Matthew