Ok its good but Malfoy is such a ass! I kinda thought it would be longer or at least have a longer plot. Basically she gets on the train after being tormented, told she is the head girl, tormented and tormented more.

i guess i could never bring myself to read all of this just because it hurt too much to imagine you going through all this pain. I read your first chapter a while ago, but i didn't have it in me to continue...but now things have changed i just wanted to see what exactly you have been going through (up to when you wrote this story atleast), and well i am sorry for not reading it all earlier...it was beautiful, it reflected you, i guess thats why i 'enjoyed' reading it so much.

i really enjoyed this story i think it reveals malfoys true charictor were as some ppl try to make him this little pussy so well done. the charictors are great i like the fact hermione is not the strong defencive girl she was

god is hermoine nieve.

thats i can say.

you speak of these things as if you have done them yourself. If that is true then I truely feel sympathy, I know people who have done this at one time and what they told me is alot like what ur writing. It's a sad time in someone's life when they must do this. I hope you have since gotten over these problems.

oh please review...i think im obessed...

what the name of that song? can u email the answer 2 me?

wow. thats all that can be said is wow because it was just incredible! it was amazing and so descriptive and incredible! but i think next time you should get more of the actual story into the chapter so that there is something to follow. maybe we should see some interaction (or lack of it) with ron and harry in the next xhapter and find out a little bit more about why they abandoned her, perhaps towards the end they could start to realise how much they let her down when they see malfoy mistreat her. Yeah, that would be cool. But you got all the deep stuff and the descriptive stuff down to a t mate keep that up! amazing!

just have to boast quickly about the fact that devon murray and james and oliver phelps and rupert grint kissed me awoowoo!

Great story. Not just a great plot line, but you are a fantastic writer. Go ahead continue! I don't know what I am talkikng about I never update eitgher. But you should. Now. Go...continue.

you took long enough! no I'm kidding, that was totally worth waiting for. I can't believe you let yourself think you're a rubbish writer, ever - that was really good. and yes, i can see you are slowly tying p the loose ends regardless of what some halfwits (no names, you know who) may say in their various complaints. keep up the great writing, I shall try to be patient for more!

ooh wow sorry if i missed a couple updates \

very deep, very emotional.

fabulous :]

dude, where are the updates? wanna know what happens next - soon!

WRITE MORE OR I SHALL HAVE TO HUNT YOU DOWN AND TEAR YOU LIMB FROM LIMB MUSCLE FROM BONE BLOOD FROM FLESH.

Woo go Roro! Well good story-more please! Lol keep going, go on, off u go, back to ur comp-no, no revision for u. Write bitch!
Sorry, I may have got slightly over excited, but please write more soon (before i have to chain u to the keyboard)

creepy... oh yes malfoy is still the one that me know and hate... hermione is just fading away to nothingness... but i'm sure she will have something that draco will want... maybe links into her old chums? surely she has a memory..? jsut a suggestion :) keep up the fantastic work, tis awesomeness