|Reviews for Harry Potter, Heir of Gryffindor|
| lady of the midnight court chapter 47 . 10/23/2007
compleatly and totaly amazing! i absalutly love it 100% ya i love love love it!
| feefreetree chapter 10 . 10/8/2007
wow, at first this fic was just kind of okay. Harry was very complacent and easy going. i dont like this very much but i was going to try and read through it and see if it got any better but so far it really hasnt.
My first problem came when harry and remus had already solved the big problem of the unforgivables with out much work, except the mention of reading about religion.
Now you have harry in a alternate dimension where he has kids.
i think your biggest problem is you go from a very standerd and close rowling setting into this whole other place...i guess ill read a little farther and see where you take it.
| Rocky235 chapter 2 . 10/5/2007
I read some or all of this a long time ago, but as I suffer from CRS I had to start at the beginning.
Other than telling you how I'm enjoying this, appreciating the lack of typos, finding pleasure in the easy to read dialog, and always thinking your characters are top notch what can I say?
I'm laid up for awhile and finding your story is just the ticket. Course, if the Indians beat the Yankees tonight that will make this a perfect day.
Three and a half years after you finished this and we're still reading it. Thank you for sharing and I am also excited about "Clash".
| J M Lommer chapter 1 . 10/4/2007
so when are Harry and Ginny getting togethet...My Rating-9
| GiGiFanFic chapter 14 . 9/27/2007
I just couldn,t resist so I,m reading this for the fourth time. Since you are working on the sequel, I just have to mention something I noticed a couple reads ago but ignored. Seeing it for the fourth time I must tell you. In ch. 10, James asking if he is chopped liver, and Sirius informing him no it should be chopped veal. Prongs is a full grown stag, thus he is :venison: not veal. Further down Harry is told by Goderic that he is his sole remaining :Hear;, but it should read :Heir:There were a couple of repeated short phrases, but on the whole this is the very best version of this fic. Excellent writing and imagination at work here. I know that I shall enjoy the sequel as well.
| Talanne chapter 2 . 9/26/2007
This story was recommended at some place or other so I decided to give it a go. So far it looks good. I have to wonder about your decision to give the same training to Neville that you're going to give to Harry. He asks for some training and gets it and then some? Yet until now the only thing that has been offered to Harry is oclumency. It even seems like Neville asked it first and then they decided to give the same offer to Harry. I fear that you're going to write it like he's suddenly gotten some extra courage and now believes in himself and becomes the next best dueller since Flitwick or something.. never a good thing. I'll just have to wait and see what's going to happen. But I can tell you that if he is going to magiacally be superb at magic now that he got his nose broken in a fight with Death Eaters it's going to feel so unrealistic that.. or if the boy who's never practised any kind of physical activity and who's the most clumsy person in the whole story takes to ballet and gymnastics automatically.. well I probably won't care for it very much. I'll be expecting very, very slow progress if none at all..
| OoCCoO chapter 47 . 9/18/2007
I read this story a long, long time ago. A few months ago, I was looking for a fic to read, and I remembered this one and the plot, vaguely. Mostly, I just remembered how much I liked it and a few scenes that stuck out in my mind. So, I went searching through my "fav fics" list and I couldn't find it! I didn't remember your author name, or the fic name, as I had read it so long ago, but I searched all over with what I had! I thought the title had to do with "Heir of Gryffindor," but I searched and searched and still couldn't find it! It was so upsetting and I had given up hope! But I saw the sequel you posted, and I looked at who had written it, and I thought, "nah, couldn't be... but, lemme check anyway." So I clicked and looked at your first story and there it was! I absolutely LOVE this fanfic and I am SO HAPPY that I found it! The very first thing I did was add it to my story list so I would never lose it ever again!
So, I just wanted to say that I love your writing and creativity, and I think your story "is the bomb!" Once I finish rereading this, I cannot wait to read the sequel! Thanks! :-)
| fraewyn chapter 47 . 9/11/2007
I finished it!
I'd been lagging in reading it for some reason, even though it's one of my current favs!
Can't wait to get started on the sequel!
| fraewyn chapter 43 . 9/11/2007
picks his jaw up off of the floor and reattaches it
| MrPowell chapter 47 . 9/9/2007
a good book. now on to the sequel!
| fraewyn chapter 26 . 8/31/2007
Why didn't he tell someone. Am I missing something? He sees a battle happening and doesn't warn someone? Anyone?
| ExtremeXShinyXHeartagram chapter 47 . 8/30/2007
ok well ive spent two days reading this story so I canread the sequal and I must say it is THE best Harry Potter fic that I have read and thats alot seeing as I have been through every page of HP fics reading most ! Off to read the sequal
| fraewyn chapter 20 . 8/30/2007
Do they know that it's not Godric?
| fraewyn chapter 10 . 8/30/2007
DEUS EX MACHINA!
| fraewyn chapter 9 . 8/30/2007