Reviews for Destiny’s Ghost
Lerris chapter 1 . 9/16
I've read through part of nine then did some skimming and here are my thoughts:
1. Harry had people that cared for him left, so why jump to a new world? This makes no sense. He did his bit for king and country. He is under no obligation to repeat again and again.
2. Your Harry is not Harry, since he apparently has a crap ton of extra abilities, skills, etc, etc.
3. Your Harry seems basically perfect, and than can be a bit boring at times.
4. This is marked Harry plus Hermione, yet from what I read Hermione is stuck in the original world. Perhaps that changes?

My general recommendation is to at least rework the beginning to convince the reader that Harry really needed a chance of scene and not just a long vacation, perhaps with Hermione. Beyond that, since it is listed as Harry/Hermione, make sure she shows up for at least half of it, one way, or another, or remove her as a character. I admittedly didn't read the whole thing, so perhaps she is in later chapters.
Guest chapter 26 . 1/10
Hi
I have been following his fic since I found it a few years ago and was wondering if there was a chance for any update?

I would love to read more and I am sure I'm not the only one!
Sekhmet chapter 26 . 12/29/2016
Hey i was just reading this and REALLY REALLY REALLY wanted to read more any chance?
AliceHeart13 chapter 26 . 10/30/2016
Pleaasseee Updaaaatteee.
Aly
Thefriendyouhate chapter 26 . 8/17/2016
I'm really sad that you have t updated this story I was really interested in it. Good storyline doin well with character portrayal. Makin me cry as well. I really wanted ta see where this story was goin too bad you haven't updated really wish you would
Thefriendyouhate chapter 14 . 8/17/2016
Don't ever listen to the battle of hogwarts theme and read this story. I keep tearing up, gosh why do people have ta be so untrusting. Ya I understand that everyone is cautious but really their all bein just so ugggg CANTE THEY SEE HE MEANS NO HARM. Really upset with them all right now cept Severus
sam chapter 26 . 7/21/2016
Just found this and loved it. I wish there was more
ADDICTED TO THIS chapter 26 . 5/22/2016
I GOTTA SAY PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE THIS FIC I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT IF HARRY GETS HIS FAMILY FROM HIS ORIGINAL WORLD.. THE REACTIONS OF BOTH LOTS OF PEOPLE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE

I'M BEGGING YOU CONTINUE THIS!
kinley626 chapter 26 . 4/7/2016
A very intereting story. A shame that it has been left unfinished.
panther73110 chapter 26 . 3/8/2016
Love your story and hope you will finish it someday
addicted fan chapter 26 . 2/17/2016
hey I have been following this story for years and month after month, year after year I wait desperately for an update or a finish to this story I would love to read it as a finished story hope you are able to do so soon
Guest chapter 26 . 1/14/2016
You've not updated this story since Oct 30,2009 and yet you write this on your profile?
"I am continuing the story, however, it may be slowly... as in maybe a year or so between updates. Sorry about that.
10/30/2009 I wanted to inform all you wonderful readers I am continuing the story. Although it appears to be occurring at a slower pace than I expected. Thank you for reading. Jade"

Your favorites listing shows a story that was just PUBLISHED on Jan 10, 2016! It's obvious that your still logging in and at least reading stories, so how about actually updated this story or your profile to advise your readers what you're doing about it! Is it abandoned as most feel, or are you just blocked as to where to go with it?

It is frustrating reading a really good story and not having it completed. It is why more and more readers have stopped even opening non-completed stories and leaving reviews giving authors a reason to continue. Many feel that if a story isn't completed they won't even bother to start reading it as too many get left in an unfinished state. It is authors like you that hurt those that truly need and want feedback on their current and constantly updated stories.
GBTtown chapter 26 . 6/10/2015
wonderful story that died an untimely death
Saga chapter 26 . 6/7/2015
Please Continue writing your wonderful story
kid chapter 26 . 4/24/2015
I love this story please please update soon
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