Reviews for Breath Of Power
acetwolf94 chapter 5 . 9/14/2013
I like it. Add more!
nour chapter 5 . 9/11/2013
it was wander full and so sweat , I love it very much .
and I hope that you will write more beautiful chapters like you , and I want to apologise from you about what I am writing cause its the first time I type a review .
_ you are a romantic person and I love that , always write what your heart tell you to write.
and good luck by writing other stories :)
shinyoko420 chapter 5 . 12/11/2012
the best oroanko ever !
NinjaSheik chapter 5 . 9/5/2010
Trissacar chapter 5 . 11/14/2009
omg is jealous of anko!

awesome! I gonna try not to think about orochimaru all night...
Trissacar chapter 3 . 11/14/2009
o0o0o ho ho ho! totally inappropiate! but i'd still want to be anko ironically i turned 17 today!
Trissacar chapter 2 . 11/14/2009
lolz hotness!
Jigoku-Dayu93 chapter 5 . 3/28/2009
Oh my god, I loved this! Yeah, there's some mistakes, but the story more than makes up for it! Oro x Anko lemon is the best! I bow before you! I wish you would add to it, but seeing as it is five years old, I take it you won't. *cries* Oh well, great story. Thank you!
Acw chapter 5 . 11/22/2008
That was awsome! It needs more thrusting
Artfully Troublesome chapter 1 . 6/9/2006
So are you going to end it there? I mean not a lot of people write about Anko/Orochimaru like that...

Don't hurt me!
The Amazing Drojii chapter 5 . 5/14/2006
I really love this story! You should od more! Espicially about Anko!
biyatch chapter 5 . 11/26/2005
ow...that's good...more

there's something about oroXanko pairing i find sexy...

more more! hehehe
Anon chapter 4 . 9/8/2005
So, first off, some criticism. There are a few grammar mistakes, especially at the end of dialogue. It seems that you don't put a comma at the end of someone's speaking. If it's not a question mark or exclamation mark or etc. then you have to put a comma there. Like for example, "Hello," said so and so as opposed to "Hello" said so and so.

And another thing I want to point out is that, everytime a new person begins speaking, you're supposed to start a new paragraph, instead of letting it be in the same one. So for example, at the end of Chapter 3, a correction would be:

"Early as always, eh Orochimaru?" questioned a silver haired man, followed by his blonde haired apprentice.

"Jiraiya," Anko whispered harshly under her breath.

Other than that, great job and I'll be waiting excitedly for updates! :)
Emperatris chapter 5 . 7/22/2005
This is nice! I've been looking for an OroAnko fic and... yah,, I was satisfied when I read this one! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. This fic is definitely going to my favorite stories list! Woot!

sp chapter 5 . 4/13/2005
Seriously disturbing.
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