Reviews for SSX: Hot Zone
liljimmyurine chapter 13 . 10/4/2007
I've gotta say, I've loved your work here. you're a pretty good writer. There are a few cliches here and there, but it's an overall damn good story. Beleivable characters, strong plot. I love it. I hope this gets to you, since you haven't updated in over two years. I'm a fan
Forgotton chapter 10 . 1/26/2006
NONONONONO

You did not just kill him WAH MAC! Good story though i really like it! so far...
Pudgoose chapter 13 . 2/4/2005
NO! Oh my gosh, no no no no no! How could you! Beanie-weanie can't be hurt! Who will properly mourn Mac's death? Who will be there for DC to make fun of? Who will... vomit... in Hummers?

AH! No, Bean, no! You annoy us to no end, but we don't want you to die! PLEASE don't die!

Oh... Deep breathes... One... two...

Okay. SHAME ON ETHAN AND HIS SEXUAL INSTINCTS! He needs to save his probably-non-virgin-ness for Zoe. Oh, if I was his mother, the earful he would get... But it's good to know that Ethan and Kim are safe-or probably safe-at least for a while.

Great story so far. You have a beautiful sense of creativity and dictation. This, coupled with the descriptive action words you are so fond of using, makes you a wonderful writer, fanfiction or not. :) Thanks for taking time out to write such a thrilling tale. I've loved every minute of it.

Eagerly anticipating another update,

Puddy-G
Pudgoose chapter 12 . 2/4/2005
Man, I do hope Ethan and Zoe hook up together at the end of this, cause Ethan SERIOUSLY needs a girlfriend. The guy watches too much television. First his discovery channels... and now this MacGyver?

Hm... maybe I should watch MacGyver...

Excellent! Excellent! Excellent! The only thing I'm dreading right now is the moment that I run out of chapters... :(
Pudgoose chapter 11 . 2/2/2005
What? What is Ethan DOING? And how can Mac just... just... die? And what's this about a nipple ring?

Lol, with all my questions, I must have been sleeping throughout the entire chapter...

NAH! :P It's too good for that. My congrats to you!
TriRedEye chapter 13 . 2/1/2005
Whoa. This is just awesome again. Great job. Kinda morbid but I've been hoping Bean dies from the beginning.:P
TriRedEye chapter 2 . 2/1/2005
Here I am reading SSX, like I said. And I noticed the hint about Winter Frost:P. This story looks great too. Keep it up.
Pudgoose chapter 10 . 1/31/2005
NO! Mac, NO! Ah, I hope he's okay! The suspense! The suspense of it all!

**Deep breath**

As a side-note, I think I'll just call you Tom Clancy from now on.
Pudgoose chapter 9 . 1/30/2005
Whoa momma! This is fantastic! I'm squealing from suspense and then laughing at myself! xD Brilliant!

Must continue!
Pudgoose chapter 8 . 1/30/2005
AH! Why the cliffhanger? WHY?

You write brilliantly, with a wonderful pace and a great sense of dialogue. My stomach ties itself into knots though all the tense scenes, relaxes for a brief period, and then tenses up again. :) I love it. Bravo, I say!

To next chapter, I also say!
Pudgoose chapter 7 . 1/30/2005
You write brilliantly.

And I'm so glad I'm only halfway through.
Pudgoose chapter 6 . 1/30/2005
Ethan! NO!
Pudgoose chapter 5 . 1/29/2005
SWEET CRAP! THIS IS INTENSE!

Bravo!
Pudgoose chapter 4 . 1/28/2005
Oh dear... my "plot-thickening" senses are tingling...
Pudgoose chapter 3 . 1/28/2005
Oh dear. Tense scene. Tense scene. Gotta read on!

Very, very interesting, btw!
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