|Reviews for 4 Shifting Loyalties|
| Nadreth chapter 14 . 4/14/2004
Asom I'll read the next one soon!
| Hydra-Star chapter 14 . 3/23/2004
I really like this chapter, and the entire fic. I wonder what Malfoy wanted to tell Snape. It sounds pretty suspicious to me. I wonder if Snape has already taken the dark mark. It doesn't seem very likely, but I can't help but wonder. Well, anyway, this is really good. I like it a lot. Keep it up!
| Zmedlebum chapter 14 . 3/17/2004
Wow that was ruddy brilliant. You get better and better every time! Keep it up!
| Straycat1 chapter 14 . 3/16/2004
uh, that Avery. he is a slime true and true indeed. I like Sirius, he isnt really that bad. You know, you might just make a Snape fan out of me yet.
| Daisie chapter 14 . 3/16/2004
Hm... Why was Malfoy so, o_0 nice? Oh, and what book was he talking about? Well, that was a good ending, definitely leaves you wanting some answers... and that in turn makes you want to read the next part. Good Job!
| Akasha Ravensong chapter 14 . 3/16/2004
I love this fic so much and i am off to read five now! and if you do the malfoy fic half as good as this people will read it because of your style, if not for the characters!
| Rocky235 chapter 14 . 3/15/2004
You had some great lines such as, 'Lucius sneered coldly at the boy. “Of course I do you poncy idiot', and "which was now oozing across the corridor floor".
This was a nice ending chapter, both with content and writing. Thank you for your story and I will see you next year.
"Still, Avery looks thoroughly miserable" and "not so good with human transfiguration, Black?
| Joshua Glass chapter 14 . 3/15/2004
*snickers* Avery deserves to be a slug. If he were an Animagus that's probably what he'd turn in to.
| Blue Rainbird chapter 13 . 3/15/2004
This first of your stories I've been reading, and I can't wait to get my hands on the rest of them! You've really made some realistic characters; it's a joy to read about.
Please, next chapter soon!
| Joshua Glass chapter 13 . 3/14/2004
Demolition team? *laughs* Good name for them. Excellent chapter (although a bit short) I want more!
| Daisie chapter 13 . 3/14/2004
YaY Marauders! YaY Severus! YaY-Everyone-Hating-Avery! (lol)
Good Chapter... now I really wouldn't mind if you had Avery transferred to Durmstrang )
| Rocky235 chapter 13 . 3/14/2004
Very well written and easy on my eyes. Really a nice chapter.
| lucidity chapter 13 . 3/14/2004
I'm glad she told Severus about what happened with Avery.
LOL, Leave it to Malfoy to know how to get into the girl's dorms!
| yinyang-shadow chapter 1 . 3/14/2004
THat wuz wonderfull! keep writing. i'm looking foreward to the next episode. that was probably the best fanfic i've ever read. i didn't read your 1st and 2nd and 3rd ones, but i will 'cause i'll bet they're excellent. have a nice day.
| Emma Barrows chapter 13 . 3/14/2004
This was an amazing story! Please update soon!
I can't wait to see what happens next!
Wonderfully written with an excellent plot. I read the other chapters and loved them!