Reviews for 4 Shifting Loyalties
Emma Barrows chapter 3 . 3/14/2004
I hope he asks her!
Wonderful chapter!
Emma
Emma Barrows chapter 2 . 3/14/2004
Whoo...I have to keep reading!
Emma Barrows chapter 1 . 3/14/2004
Whoo! really good! I'm off to read more!
Emma
Zmedlebum chapter 12 . 3/13/2004
"He made a mental note to use Avery for target practice for the last few weeks of school."
The thought of using anyone as target practise in regards to Sirius is pretty funny, as well as putting him in a sundress! You said to me to let you know if I write anything else: Well *ahem* I have a new one shot. You can check it out if you want.
I love your Sirius. He's so cool. And of course I like Muriel. Sirius and Muriel hm? Can't wait to see where this goes.
Rocky235 chapter 12 . 3/13/2004
I hope Sirius delivers more than a few simple hexes onto Avery. Not to mention what Muriel should do to him.
Good chapter.
lucidity chapter 12 . 3/13/2004
This fourth year is excellent so far! So sad about Mur's mother, though. It is hard even if your mom is not a paragon of virtue.
I did like the boggart. I almost felt sorry for Lucius. I think that Avery needs to have a good castration spell. I'll bet Mur knows of such things!
I guess Sev is getting clsoer to taking the mark? Sad.
Sirius and Mur? Hmm.
Hydra-Star chapter 12 . 3/12/2004
Once again, I'm getting the strangest vibes from some great guy in the sky (if your a devoute Christian, I'm sorry for the pun) that Sirius and Mur are going to get together. It's qutie strange, really...
Okay. that was a joke. Not a very good one, but oh well. Still, I do see hints. I can't wait to find out if they get together or not! But anyway, this chapter is probably my favorite so far. It's great! I wonder how Snape will react when he finds out. Well, anyway, great fic. I can't wait to see the next chapter!
Daisie chapter 12 . 3/12/2004
o_0
Wasn't expecting that one...
Sirius likes her! Either that, or he's gone soft... (lol) prove me wrong PLEASE! Oh, and if you want to go ahead and kill Avery, that's fine with me as well...
*cheers*
SoLungFish chapter 11 . 3/11/2004
That's awesome! . Please keep writing!
Rocky235 chapter 11 . 3/10/2004
This was one of your best written chapters. Very good work.
Hydra-Star chapter 11 . 3/10/2004
I really like this chapter. It's really good. And the way that the boggart was used was really funny! I couldn't stop laughing! Malfoy kissing in a closet; Who would have thought? Great job! Keep it up! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Daisie chapter 11 . 3/10/2004
Sorry... had to get that out there...
I've had the slightess feeling that Sirius like Muriel, and I've just been waiting for proof ;) Unfortunately there haven't been many, and it's killing me! GRR...
Anway, good chapter, especially in terms of character development and what not...
*cheers*
Daisie chapter 11 . 3/10/2004
SIRIUS LIKES HER!
Kaleidoscope chapter 10 . 3/9/2004
i hope muriel and sirius will get further together sooner o'.'o
(waiting anxiously for the next chapter!)
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