Reviews for 4 Shifting Loyalties
Akasha Ravensong chapter 10 . 3/8/2004
kewl, lol, por malfoy...NOT...actually probably poor Mur soon!
Blessed BE
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Zmedlebum chapter 10 . 3/8/2004
oh I like this very much!
Zmedlebum chapter 6 . 3/8/2004
i've said it before and I'll say it again: i love it.
Rocky235 chapter 10 . 3/8/2004
The boggart prank was good, Malfoy deserved it. A photo posted in the Great Hall would have been nice too. Oh well. Muriel ought to figure out Sev's shields pretty soon.
Nice chapter.
Hydra-Star chapter 9 . 3/7/2004
I wonder what she's going to do with the boggart. Also, is the Auror who killed her mother not being mentioned importaint. Well, anyway, I like this chapter a lot. It's really good. Keep it up! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Rocky235 chapter 9 . 3/7/2004
I bet killing Mrs. Deesia off was more satisfying than killing off a defenceless bird. lol
Nice writing, clear and concise.
Rocky235 chapter 8 . 3/7/2004
I'm glad Muriel and Sirius finally got together a bit.
Rocky235 chapter 7 . 3/7/2004
That was a very nice and poetic description of the grounds and lake.
Good job.
SoLungFish chapter 8 . 3/6/2004
Most excellent, I ADORE the story. But...where is the rest of it? O_o
Daisie chapter 9 . 3/6/2004
Woah! I was not expecting this... *exhale*
BIG surprise, but it was a welcome bit of drama, I liked this chapter. Poor Muriel though, and poor Sev, I wish he didn't have to be all Death-Eater-ish, ah well...
You gave a really good reason for Severus learning Legelimens, you were setting up for it for the longest but I didn't realise until now. Good Job with that...
*cheers*
Akasha Ravensong chapter 9 . 3/6/2004
interesting, i can't wait to see where this story goes!
Blessed be
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Akasha Ravensong chapter 8 . 3/6/2004
kewl...ONWARD to teh next chapter!
Blessed be
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Akasha Ravensong chapter 7 . 3/6/2004
i like it i can't wait for more so i can find out whats going to happen!
Blessed Be
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Hydra-Star chapter 8 . 3/5/2004
This is really good. But why am I getting hints of Mur/Sirius? Actuall, that would be a very intresting twist. I mean, Mur and Snape are supposed to get together and Mur and Sirius hate eachother. You could really make that into an intresting problem. And we all know that eaither Mur dies, goes somwhere, or gets together with someone else before the begining of the books or else she would probably be mentioned in them or something. Hm...
Daintress chapter 1 . 3/5/2004
{From E-mail, but it made me feel great to recieve it so I thought I'd add it so I can view it again later!}
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