Reviews for The Usual Friday Night
PhantomhiveMocca chapter 1 . 10/15/2013
just that
not something romantic
ouuuuw
so sad
but i'm a bit like the story
Sorry if i'm not like your hope
(my review) i mean
Guest chapter 1 . 9/12/2013
I'm pretty sure the dark mark is on the left forearm though..
Khashana chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
Awesome job.
miz chapter 1 . 4/24/2006
Love the descriptions. Very aptly written.
mintaminta chapter 1 . 2/12/2006
this was a really good one shot, id love to see what would have follwed their formal meeting but oh well, thats up to my imagination i suposse...gj
Fenaily chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
I spotted this in miss saber's h/d recs and am sure glad I checked it out. I love how dialogue here is unecessary. Thank you for this lovely post-war bit!
Noriko M. Chijinu chapter 1 . 2/8/2004
eerr... don't really get the end.. but i like your manner of writing, keep it up!
Emily chapter 1 . 2/7/2004
Very well written. I like the angst in the story and the buildup of Draco and Harry’s “relationship
berry-berry chapter 1 . 2/7/2004
You have a really nice writing style, that's for sure. Your words make it easy for a picture to be painted in the readers mind, easy to visualise all of what's happening. Nice quality.
Will this be longer then one chapter? it's an intersting start - but that's just it - it only feels like a start at this point. It would be hard to pass off the story as it without it feeling unfinished, so I really do hope you at least write a second part to it. It would be a shame not to.
Good luck with your writing in the future!
Cass chapter 1 . 2/7/2004
Dude! Appropriately length-ed and bittersweet. I like!