"Shut up."

"Can't, dude. The only time I can be quiet is when I'm distracted or, like, chewing on my p-"

This was hilarious and so totally in character. Above is only one of a lot of sentences that cracked me up. I love your Ryan/Seth stories.

*Giggles* that was cute!

Great work!

Loved the dialogue through out this! Very hot but also realistic.

I seriously think you're channeling Seth and a little Ryan too, the dialogue is scarily similar to the show, (only better beacause of the slash!).

I always liked "Good Will Hunting" and this was just very cute and smooth. Loved it.

Okay, seriously, I think I've read this story something close to 6-7 times and every single time it makes me laugh out loud. You just capture these two perfectly! Heh. "poke you in the eye." Cracks me up EVERY TIME. Keep up the good work!

AHA! oh thats great. i love it. seth's awesome.

Ahahahahaa! LOve your fics!

There's nothing like a little SethRyan action. Good job with Seth's dialogue, as well. This is my first time having ventured into 'The O.C.' fanfiction, and I was terrified someone would butcher his awesome speech. Write some more S/R. You're quite good at it.

"...or other things" .Loved it! It was great, write another )

lmfao...that was funny haha

What are you doing? Can you go back and update 'The Difference Between?' In case you couldn't tell, I am a lil obsessed :)... yeah, nice short, by the way.
/selfprofessedlunatic/

HA! i love! I love Seth! hehe
~Laura