|Reviews for First Steps|
| Jedi Jesi Jiin chapter 2 . 3/11/2014
Nice. Are you going to continue?
| Lora Kael chapter 2 . 5/12/2009
He he, nice.
I thought you wrote it was going to be a seven part in the first chapter. Did you change that?
| bendingwind chapter 2 . 5/9/2005
Very good! And I love the description of dance, being a dancer myself.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
| Jedi Knight Padme chapter 2 . 3/19/2005
| Joogie chapter 2 . 3/6/2004
This needs updates - both on TF.N and here! Please do something about it!
| Neonlights matuschkabigpond.com chapter 2 . 3/4/2004
oh shut up skywalker. heheheheheheheheh.
| Jedikma chapter 2 . 3/3/2004
This was good. You got to love Mara, she is just not going to let her guard down for Luke. Not at this point anyway! Can't wait for more.
| someone chapter 2 . 3/2/2004
Aw,how cute.I love L/M romance.
| dg chapter 2 . 3/2/2004
cute. I like.
| SithKnight-Galen chapter 1 . 2/9/2004
*snicker, snort* Ahh the flashbacks to high school that this little tale brings back. Heh, I do have to wonder, is this just the pre-lude, or was that the entire piece? Either way, it was humourous and well written, and addresses Mara's character brilliantly.
| Anna Skywalker chapter 1 . 2/9/2004
Lol, Cute. I love little stories like these. Write more!
| kayladie chapter 1 . 2/8/2004
Wonderful, simply wonderful!
"Just a few more meters and my journey would be complete."
No, somehow, I have the feeling it is only beginning! Not that that required any prescience on my part...you said there'd be six more of these! LOL!
So, when can we expect the next one? :D
| ERAASAY chapter 1 . 2/8/2004
HI! GREAT STORY! JUST ONE PART I WANTED TO COMMENT ON-WHY MUST EVERYOND TEAR DOWN WALLS? YOU KNOW, MOST WALLS HAVE DOORS! OR AT LEAST WINDOWS! YOU DONT ALWAYS NEED TO TEAR DOWN, SMASH THROUGH, OR BLOW UP THE WALL-JUST FIND A DOOR [OR WINDOW], UNLOCK IT, AND GO THROUGH! NO NEED TO DE SO DESTRUCTIVE!
OKAY-IM DONE RANTING NOW! I REALLY LIKED IT!
| Jedikma chapter 1 . 2/7/2004
Wonderful! I can't wait for more. Once again a well written story.