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phineashiccup chapter 9 . 3/28/2015
love this story can't wait for another chapter
isabella svensson sweden chapter 9 . 4/20/2007
i think it good, and well writhen
Experimetnal Angel234 chapter 9 . 8/26/2006
00 WHAT HAPPEND! DID TALA MAKE OUT WIHT TYSON OR SOMETHING! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE NOW! IT TYSON GONNA BE ALL RIGHT! I DON'T WANT MY LITTLE DRAGON HURT!

Andre: Don't need to make us deaf! Anyway, can I kill Tala the alligator!

Tala: 00

No Andre, you can't kill him!

Tala: *Sighs in relife*

After this fic, you CAN kill him.

Tala: *Gulps* Yikes...

Alex: I suggest you run, FAR AWAY from here Tala. *Turns to the author* Anyway, the summary was great and the story's plot is getting more dramatic. Update NOW, you haven't for almost a year already. Tina's getting restless.

TIna: *Walking in circels, mumbling* Must...read...fic...

Tala, Me, Andre and Alex: *Move away from Tina*

Andre: She's lost it, again...here, usually, it's Tina's job to give the plushies but since, you know, she's gone crazy. Here you go and it's Tala, Kai, Rei proof so they can't steal it *Hands a Winter Tyson plushie* has 2 more ses of winter gear. En...en...enjoy! *Winces* I hate that word, Ja ne!

Tina: *Walking towards the open window*

Me and Alex: TINA!
Laurelleaves chapter 9 . 8/16/2005
Aw OMG poor Tyson, please update soon! TYxKAI FOREVA - LOL.
Evilmiko21 chapter 9 . 7/22/2005
updates u kno u wanna cuz i'm counting on ty/kai!
I'mAGirlxD chapter 9 . 7/8/2005
this is so sad, please tell me that ur gonna continue this fic. T_T

i really wanna see what's gonna happen!
Fallen One-Winged Tenshi chapter 9 . 6/18/2005
i somewhat agree that Tala and Tyson make a very interesting couple. . . i hope you update soon. If so make Kai angst and some Tala/Tyson fluff? Here's some Pocky for you kool story . . . . Update soon
Cryysis chapter 9 . 4/22/2005
its good, keep up the good wokrm and update soon, okay? and update ur other stories, so that way i can read more! well i gtg, later!
yaoiloverever chapter 9 . 4/7/2005
O ! Tala fell in love with Tyson! Never saw that one coming...damn. Do NOT change this into TalaTy..I dun really like that pairing...TyKa fureva! XO ! w00t! Great story! Lovin' it!
J. Rukawa chapter 9 . 4/7/2005
continue the story or else you'll get a big smasher punch from me!
dragonfly-affinity chapter 9 . 4/3/2005
wow... *whistles happily*

nice story XD

love the twist and hope you update soon! )
Lily Carroll chapter 9 . 3/6/2005
Ei read your fic in one night...

Poor Ty-chan.. poor Kai-chan...

but...

I adore to see them suffering _ * sweet smile *

Ty-chan is adorable and sweet, Kai looks so lacking... and Tala-chan looks so bad!

Tala: I am not bad.. just not understood...

Lily: No... but this adorable one like this _
MEe chapter 9 . 3/5/2005
WoW... i never thought that u would update. it's been a long time now.

anyway, keep updating. i can't belive tala loves tyson xD
Kiina chapter 9 . 3/3/2005
oh my god...kep it going or else...muahahahahah-er...whateva
maxie's cute chapter 9 . 3/2/2005
o Tala and Tyson how cute that would be a great pairing keep it up and i hope you update soon
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