Reviews for Gohan and Videl: Our beginning
lennywashere chapter 2 . 3/14/2017
ParadoxalPen chapter 1 . 2/18/2017
Well, technically it's Gotenks' fault cuz if they weren't so cocky with the fat majiin buu, they would've killed him a lot faster...
Guest chapter 1 . 12/13/2016
Your grammar is just something else...

Put some more describing words to give us an imagery of the scenery. Don't suddenly say that person A is in this building in one paragraph, and he just magically goes to another building in the next one. I'm really confused. The story's fine, but I've seen way better ones in terms of story-telling.
nu2004kg chapter 2 . 12/7/2016
I loved this you!
Guest chapter 14 . 10/29/2016
when you gonna write it im waiting.
Den chapter 3 . 9/24/2016
Type your review here.
You are too good when they marry do a sex with wild gohan story
Xenosaiyan chapter 5 . 6/8/2016
God I am loving this story so far.
Guest chapter 6 . 3/27/2016
Amazing story
LightningFireZC chapter 14 . 9/27/2015
It had everything, comedy, romance, angst and a perfect capture of everyone's character.
I tip my scouter to you, great work and amazing story
ashiquahz13 chapter 14 . 9/19/2015
You ideas are awesome love it
ashiquahz13 chapter 14 . 9/19/2015
not to sound sexist but no wonder this thing is m rated your a guy but the only thing that's bothering me is the sickingly sweet speeches that annoy the cap out of me seriously I hate the mushy things it makes me think ur gay not that that's a problem that is awesome but other than that I love your story
sex chapter 3 . 9/2/2015
Guest chapter 4 . 8/24/2015
Anuraj chapter 14 . 8/3/2015
nice story
Megan chapter 6 . 7/15/2015
This chapter was wierd but sweet, but during the time I was reading goku's comments I said "since when did Goku become a fortune cookie?"
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