Reviews for Gohan and Videl: Our beginning
ELBL chapter 1 . 8/24/2004
AW! I feel so sory for Gohan! He's seems so sad... I almost CRIED! But Goten and Trunks? HILARIOUS! I practically choked! Brilliant Chapter!
Guest chapter 5 . 8/23/2004
Another wonderful chapter. I especially enjoyed everyone's reacrion to the news that Gohan and Videl were getting married. I also liked that you didn't make Goku overly clueless here, even though he sometimes has moments. It was just nice to see that he wasn't acting like a...circus Vegeta so adamantly put it at such a special event. Anyway here's to another wonderful chappie, and I'll read more tomorrow. I have to finish typing the rest of my fic for you guys. Ah there's no rest for the weary huh. Great job. Update soon. Laters. LB. ;)
ladybugg chapter 4 . 8/23/2004
Well the brats are gone, and believe me even though they have no powers like Goku or Vegeta it isn't from their lack of trying. I get a make believe kamahama wave in the face every time the little boogers are over. Anyways...ya probaly don't want to hear that. Just wanted to tell you that the info on the robots was pretty impressive. Very original. Loved the way the story is flowing so nicely together. It's just too bad that ole Hercule really couldn't stand a chance against Gohan. I would've paid good money to see that fight. Looking forward to the next chapter, and once again sorry for the novel. Great job. Laters. LB. ;)
ladybugg chapter 3 . 8/21/2004
Heehee Snogging. Is that a catch phrase that you've made up yourself? I might have to steal that phrase from ya, with your permission of course. Anyway I loved this chapter. It was overly sweet. I thought the proposal was terrific and sweet. I can't wait to read more. I'll try to read ch 4 tomorrow, because I have my two nephews over right now. Words can not explain how hard it is to concentrate in this house right now. These two brothers are the very epitome of Goku and Vegeta. So as you can guess, there's never a dull moment over here, and gah they fight and bicker like Goku and Vegeta too. GAH! So until then I guess. Keep up the great work. I'm looking forward to reading ch 4. (Hehe sorry about the novel I just wrote...but like I said my nerves are gone. Shot. Kaput. Finto. Bye bye bye.)

Great job. Laters. LB. ;)
ladybugg chapter 2 . 8/21/2004
Another wonderful chapter. I don't know, but this has episode quality written all over it. I also liked that there's a long chapter. I really get irrated when someone posts a sentence, if you know what I mean. I mean it's supposed to be a story, and not an desription. So yes the long chapters are very much appreciated. Anyways I really liked how you had both G/V conversating on the past events of the Buu saga. Ironically enough I was just watching the Buu saga on tape yesterday, and you seemed to have all the info correct, and the way that you elaborated and added your own ideas into this makes it seem like an continuation of the series. So once again wonderful job, and I'm moving onward to chapter 3. Great job. Update soon. Laters. LB. ;)
Rejhan chapter 4 . 8/20/2004
Excellent chapter! Its about time that Hercule was shown up. Loved it! :D I'll be back for more soon!
Rejhan chapter 3 . 8/20/2004
Hey! Decided to read this story before I read 'a sweet surprise', just so I know the back story. I must say, so far I'm very impressed. Gohan's feeling of guilt at the start was done very well, and I loved the way that it was Videl who got through to him. Loved the romance stuff too. Very intense in places, but very well done. I'll be back to read more when I get the chance, but so far I'm loving this!
ladybugg chapter 1 . 8/19/2004
I wanted to thank you for reviewing my stories, and I wanted to return the favor. I have to say that I'm very impressed by what I've read here today. I thought that this first chapter was well thought out, and I liked how you took off from the Buu saga. That was so interesting how you placed things together. I'm sure that's how Gohan would've taken his failure at the ending of the Buu saga, but that was simply ignored on the TV show. So great job in highlighting Gohan's feelings. I have to admit though...I seriously can't wait to catch up to the rest of these chapters that you have here. Until then keep up the great work. Great job. Laters. LB. ;)
Revolver 0celot chapter 15 . 7/22/2004
i loved was crafted so exelently...will there be a sequil? plz write one...
megaman19 chapter 15 . 5/20/2004
you are a grate wrighter and you should write some more videl and gohan fics if you can get the document manager to work
SKC-ANIME-LOVER chapter 1 . 5/15/2004
I loved this story so much. thank you for writing it.
Tootsy chapter 15 . 5/13/2004
My preferred chapters are the conversation Gohan had with Videl in the beginning (when he have the moral down) and the honeymoon (not for the sex but for the way you describe their feelings for each other !) but I don't mind their making love session !
For the part I like the least, it's the way Gohan shows his true power. I would have preferred something more frightenning for Hercule ! (Yes, I'm evil ! He he he !) I also find it misses a chapter concerning Videl's bachelorette party (there is one for Gohan but not for her). It would have been funny to see that.
It's all, I will stop here because for me the remainder is perfect. Can't wait to read you again !
True Hyper Sonic chapter 9 . 5/3/2004
Hey, you're pretty good. Keep it up, dude! Oh yeah, and it's not "Elisa", it's "Erasa" as in Sharpener & Eraser, get it? School supply name pun. _
Takuma chapter 1 . 5/1/2004
Aww... Gohan's depressed! ;_;!
Bloody Waterfalls chapter 4 . 4/29/2004
great syory
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