Reviews for Gohan and Videl: Our beginning |
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![]() ![]() ![]() good finish to a good story. Even though it wasnt really a finish, on account of it was an outtake, but hey.. Anyway, on another note.. Damn i wish i was Gohan.. |
![]() ![]() Three words : I love it ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Drum roll... its the end. Sadly. Oh well, there IS the sequel. Can't wait for that update. Well until then... |
![]() ![]() ![]() so now it's over? oh well, at least i can still read the other two, which reminds me, if the next chappie comes up tommorow then sorry that it'll take me a while to review, got an overnight camping trip for school, but as soon as i get back i shall find it! As always, bu-bye for now! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey man im immpressed with that story!:-) im only 12 years old and fully respect love and passion. cant wait to read your sequels. with many positive comments, Domon11 |
![]() ![]() Are you serious a GUY wrote this! I think I'm in love. LOL..JK although I'd die if my bf could write like this and a ROMANCE story too 0.0 truly an amazing author! |
![]() ![]() can't wait! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! a sequel! can't wait to read it! bu-bye! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! I LIKE THIS VERY VERY MUCH! Gohan is very cool in this fic, whereas in GT he looks like (and is) a complete nerd. YAY GO YOU! |
![]() ![]() ![]() good story, waits for the sequel, keep up the good work, byes |
![]() ![]() SEQUEL PLEASE! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a very good ending to a wonderful story. Showing all the love Gohan and Videl have for one another. They did use protection as you said and a sweet little surprise would be waiting for them...whom could it be? Pan has been conceived and is the sweet suprise awaiting for them. I hope that Gohan does not give up on his training and become a weakling as seen in GT and Videl remains as a fighter but also a wife. Can't wait for the sequel which will chronicle the events up to the birth of Pan. Catvh ya on the flipside. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, i'm new to reading fanFictions, but this one was awsome |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw... damnit. That's the end. How we all want it to end but want it to continue once its finished. That was great story. I can't wait for the sequel or your other g/vi. Until the next one then. The more there is, the more to review... |
![]() ![]() I love your hole story,just one thing. make Videl's pregnancy a little bit more real and anyway I know you'll do a great job with the sequel. :) |