| Reviews for Gohan and Videl: Our beginning |
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   demonman21 chapter 11 . 3/31/2004 Hmm, I'm really curious about the honeymoon, wit the power of IT, he could literally take her anywhere...anyway, good chapter. |
| Frying Pan of DOOM chapter 10 . 3/29/2004 hey great chapter. GO BARRY! he sounds kool! i wish that he was real! i would LOVE to be friends with him! update when you can! |
| Lotus Blooms chapter 10 . 3/29/2004 Sorry I haven't reviewed, been doing other shit. Anyways, the story is going great and I really like it. The chapters are getting better and better but my favorite chapter had to be the sixth. I could never see Vegeta in a tux either. Update ASAP. |
| dragonfreak261 chapter 10 . 3/28/2004 it's erasa. that story was plain weird! |
| Meg chapter 10 . 3/28/2004 Her (Elisa) name is Erasa (sounds a lot like eraser...but it isn't)in the Funimation Dub. Can't remember if it's the same in the Japanese original. As far as Sharpner's last name, it's never mentioned...at least in the Eng. Dub. I haven't seen all of the Jap. originals. |
| Candy the Duck chapter 10 . 3/26/2004 more more more... i love this story u go in to the right amount of deteil. |
| Candy the Duck chapter 6 . 3/26/2004 i loved the ‘Bulma-blackmails-Vegeta-scene’ it was so funny |
| chicken coops akabrittany chapter 9 . 3/23/2004 hihihih i so ageree go videl and chichi frying pan of doom anyways i cant wait to hear bout the wedding heheh |
| dragonfreak361 chapter 9 . 3/23/2004 it was strange. i don't like the mentioning of the s word that ends with a x even though it's funny. and even though i'm a girl, i hate those hen coops. overall, the story is a really good one. |
| Frying Pan of DOOM chapter 9 . 3/22/2004 hey idea for Gohans best man PICCOLO! lol i can see him in a tux! lol you could make up a character. a guy that Gohan would 'hang' out with when Videl or sharapener where being a pain. make someone kinda nerdy but knows whats kool or you could bring Mirai trunks back into the story...GO MIRIA TRUNKS! lol! update when you can |
| Silver Warrior chapter 9 . 3/22/2004 Por Gohan. I pity him. And I'll REALLY pity him once those women do a makeover on Videl's personality. |
| simba-rulz chapter 9 . 3/22/2004 Poor Gohan-chan! It's too complicated for him! xD Anyway, I believe that Piccolo-chan should be the best man! |
| StarmanWaitingInTheSky chapter 9 . 3/22/2004 Well...Goten's still a little too young to be the best man...Why not Krillin? The two have been really close friends for most of Gohan's life. Or, you could really shock everyone and have Vegeta be the best man... lol. Honestly though. I think Krillin is a pretty good choice. |
| Frying Pan of DOOM chapter 9 . 3/22/2004 hey i go what i said by before! you could be famous one day! and i know you will! i'll be first in line to buy your book/s i'm glad you like the song. one of my personal favs! now if only i can find the CD in my room then i'll be happy! hens coop! great name! now i have something to call it when my mums friends anmd my grandmas friends come over! all the stupid hens! update when you can! |
| Silver Warrior chapter 8 . 3/20/2004 Poor Gohan. At least the guys didn't attack him. Even Gohan couldn't take his dad at Super Saiyan 3 and Vegeta at Super Saiyan 2, Mystic or not. Though how can a fast food place hold enough to feed a single Saiyan, much less 3? Their freezers are not that big. |