Reviews for Gohan and Videl: Our beginning
Kitty86 chapter 3 . 2/22/2004
Pretty funny chapter, just one question, "Baptism of Fire"? What's that? I'm going to guess your british the way you use the term snogging instead of kissing. Just a guess.
Phyre Spryte15 chapter 3 . 2/22/2004
great chappie
please update soon
Kirie05 chapter 3 . 2/22/2004
Oh no poor Hercule! Not! Haha! Cute chapter, update soon!
jewel of tasuki chapter 2 . 2/16/2004
Wowowowow! I absolutely love this fic! Please continue! this is the best gv get together I've ever red.. it seems so natural and flows into the series. I wish this was animated! hehe. Thos i was surprised that gohan already proposes to her the same day they confess their is understandible since they've been through extreme circumstances. wow. please continue. YOu're going on my author alert list! Keep up the good writing. This is also one of the better written ones. You're taste for language is great.
ss4goku2003 chapter 2 . 2/15/2004
aw this was so sweet i really liked this story i really hope you continue it soon i want to find out what happens next. I really liked how gohan told videl the story of how he beat cell and how you wrote what you thought what was going on through gohans mind i think it was very accurate. well update soon!
Fanwriterdbz chapter 2 . 2/15/2004
Brilliant! I was waiting for so long for another romantic DBZ... I'm writing my own with my own character! Hey, next, can we have them telling everyone else, or even not telling anyone for ages, cos there is some complication? I don't know what. But, that was great, so next chapter should be cool!
AnimeFanatic Too lazy to sign in chapter 2 . 2/15/2004
Aw this is so good! Omg. You have to continue it so soon! Okay? Or I'll find you and make you! XD! I'm jk. Good story! Update soon!
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