| Reviews for Gohan and Videl: Our beginning |
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  this is awesome chapter 4 . 7/14/2015 Your doing great |
| Guest chapter 4 . 3/15/2015 If the author still reads these comments 10 years later I would formally ask them to wright mor DBZ fanfiction. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 3/15/2015 Best fic EVER! |
 GokuIsMyAncestor chapter 4 . 1/7/2015 Goku is the strongest... |
| gohun with my chapter 14 . 7/22/2014 very I wish I was gohun who whant to be videl met me here hun kisses to my videl who want to be it by I wiil be back |
| sienna chapter 10 . 6/25/2014 your story's just get better and better. p.s. when you said chichi was sobbing I imagened a waterfall from her eyes |
| sienna chapter 9 . 6/25/2014 wow. I'm suprised yamcha dident go all the way with the hog. |
| SIENNA chapter 2 . 6/24/2014 O.M.G BEST AND THE BEST LONGEST CHAPTER EVER! |
| Ztb101 chapter 2 . 6/22/2014 The best fan fiction for these two that I've read, others were incomplete or over exaggerated , but I love this one! |
| marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 13 . 5/4/2014 oh i like the sex scenario it was well put and very nice |
| marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 12 . 5/4/2014 well its good but it would be more juicy if you make mature instead of teen rating describe the pleasure alittle like what people read in romantic books |
| marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 11 . 5/3/2014 this is really good |
| marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 10 . 5/2/2014 Gohan has his wife guessing thats good '' mmm where will my husband take me' that probably what Videl might say |
| marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 9 . 5/2/2014 as usual it is great |
| marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 8 . 5/2/2014 great work keep the excellent work |