Reviews for Gohan and Videl: Our beginning
this is awesome chapter 4 . 7/14/2015
Your doing great
Guest chapter 4 . 3/15/2015
If the author still reads these comments 10 years later I would formally ask them to wright mor DBZ fanfiction.
Guest chapter 4 . 3/15/2015
Best fic EVER!
GokuIsMyAncestor chapter 4 . 1/7/2015
Goku is the strongest...
gohun with my chapter 14 . 7/22/2014
very I wish I was gohun who whant to be videl met me here hun kisses to my videl who want to be it by I wiil be back
sienna chapter 10 . 6/25/2014
your story's just get better and better. p.s. when you said chichi was sobbing I imagened a waterfall from her eyes
sienna chapter 9 . 6/25/2014
wow. I'm suprised yamcha dident go all the way with the hog.
SIENNA chapter 2 . 6/24/2014
Ztb101 chapter 2 . 6/22/2014
The best fan fiction for these two that I've read, others were incomplete or over exaggerated , but I love this one!
marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 13 . 5/4/2014
oh i like the sex scenario it was well put and very nice
marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 12 . 5/4/2014
well its good but it would be more juicy if you make mature instead of teen rating describe the pleasure alittle like what people read in romantic books
marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 11 . 5/3/2014
this is really good
marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 10 . 5/2/2014
Gohan has his wife guessing thats good '' mmm where will my husband take me' that probably what Videl might say
marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 9 . 5/2/2014
as usual it is great
marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 8 . 5/2/2014
great work keep the excellent work
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