Reviews for Gohan and Videl: Our beginning
marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 7 . 5/2/2014
Hahahahahahaha McDonalds u should chosen Burger King too or Checkers very very nice
marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 6 . 5/2/2014
this is awesome
marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 5 . 5/2/2014
This is nice so basically Chi Chi, Bulma, and Vadel are eligible to be saiyans wow
marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 4 . 5/2/2014
yeah they were meant to be together just like Goku/Chi-Chi and Vegeta/Bulma nice story
marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 3 . 5/2/2014
very nice
marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 2 . 5/2/2014
wow i thought that would happen i dont why the Japanese dont want add more romantic scenes um(pg 13 at least like gohan and videl kissing or goku kissses chi chi or romance between bulma and vegeta and for cry out loud Hercule Satan that dont sound right cmon thats a well known name points to the devil 's other name they could have change his name seriously!
marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 1 . 5/2/2014
thats interesting
evelyn chapter 14 . 4/28/2014
wow finish everything
evelyn chapter 3 . 4/28/2014
write the rest
gotenks411 chapter 14 . 11/10/2013
Did NOT see that first (A/N) comeingO-o
i for one only have to ask YOU IS A GUY!?
gotenks411 chapter 9 . 11/8/2013
Oh and good thin Master Roshi wasnt there
gotenks411 chapter 9 . 11/8/2013
Ok for one it's Erasa
gotenks411 chapter 7 . 11/7/2013
I love how Vegeta like him with that short temper thats why he's my favorite
najai seals chapter 14 . 10/23/2013
like your story so much potentials
gohan and vidle chapter 13 . 9/2/2013
Gohan was going to his room but vidle was playing gohan game it called super racing but go an was on the last level and vidle did not win the game vidle got so mad she did not see or hear gohan in the room but she said gohan sorry for playing. No no no vidle its OK said gohan so Ham taking a shower gohan . OK said vidle but when she got in the shower she put her finger in her and started saying oh gohan. Than vidle stopped wen she heard a noise go an is that you no said gohan go an got in the shower with vidle and had sex with gohan harder harder harder oh yes gohan yes and it bet for hours they stop at 9:30 wow said go an I need to sleep said gohan OK said vidle so go an goes to sleep but not vidle sucks is dick but dose not stop she's been drinking beer at night gohan wake up vidle stopped but still nakined with gohan what the fuck woke up to oh shit chapter 2 vidle fucks hard gohan still wants to fuck vidle so he did so hard
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