Great story so far

I would like to eat in McDonald's

that was the most beautiful/weird/awesome wedding ever man truly amazing

ok

Absolutely amazing Gohan and Videl are by fair my to favorite character from DBZ and you made them cometo life plus the orignal animation in my head helped too haha :D thankyou again please continue this exact story it would be awesome to write a whole DBZ EPIC... epic i mean like Beowulf or Guilgimesh thankyou again well done

you wrong its erase or sothing like that ;)

dame poor gohan i mean realy ? Why chichi being sutch a douch bag eni way contenu riting and i will contenu reading :)

dude wow i coudl event amagin this your so awsom

dude pleas contenu i love this

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your awesome in every way shape and form

this is good. i give it a 4 out of 5 in all. by the way, shopping with women. why not zoidberg

Damn it pan. Gohan should have had an abortion

A perfect ending to a perfect story. You have done well, Trugeta. Speaking of which, have you written a fanfic where Vegeta and Trunks fuse? Theoretically, if their power levels are identical, the Fusion could be possible (Reviewer's Note: "We're warriors, Kakarot, not ballarinas!"). Guess who. Until the next possible sighting, this is Darkest Nightmare's Dread, slowly fading into the shadows . . . . . . . . .

Poor Sharpener. Oh, well. Sux to be him. I like the story so far, but I hope the rest is yet to come. Until the next possible sighting, this is Darkest Nightmare's Dread, slowly fading into the shadows. . . . . . .