| Reviews for Gohan and Videl: Our beginning |
|---|
   Darkest Nightmare's Dread chapter 11 . 1/17/2013 Doing good so far. I enjoy that you insert Japanese words into your story. I might consider doing that in a Dragonball fanfic. Only problem is, I need ideas. If you have any for me, just click on my profile name and PM me. Until the next possible sighting, this is Darkest Nightmare's Dread, slowly fading into the shadows . . . . . . . |
| Darkest Nightmare's Dread chapter 9 . 1/16/2013 Technically, Super Saiyan 2 is slower than Super Saiyan 1, though SS2 does endow the user with extra power. I have a Dragonball Z card (number 18), and it says the proper spelling for the ape transformation is Ohozaru. Do not mis understand. I'm not flameing you, but telling you facts to use in the future. Until the next possible sighting, this is Darkest Nightmare's Dread, slowly fading into the shadows. . . . . |
| Darkest Nightmare's Dread chapter 8 . 1/16/2013 I almost feel sorry for Gohan. That is, if I wasn't so amused. Until the next possible sighting, this is Darkest Nightmare's Dread, slowly fading into the shadows. . . . . . |
| Darkest Nightmare's Dread chapter 7 . 1/16/2013 Vegeta just keeps getting more and more amusing. Saying he's pissed is like saying Planet Vegeta was destroyed. Doing good so far. Until the next possible sighting, this is Darkest Nightmare's Dread, slowly fading into the shadows. . . . . . |
| Darkest Nightmare's Dread chapter 6 . 1/16/2013 Nice job, injecting the Japanese for "sorry" into your story. It was a nice touch. It was amusing to see Vegeta's reaction to Bulma's blackmailing. You're gonna get more reviews from me before this thing's over. Until the next possible sighting, this is Darkest Nightmare's Dread, slowly fading into the shadows . . . . . . . . . |
| Darkest Nightmare's Dread chapter 5 . 1/16/2013 Does Vegeta have a sense of humor? Would be nice if he did. Yes, I may frequently review your story, but that's because I enjoy it so far. I sincerely hope the proceeding chapters do not disappoint. Until the next possible sighting, this is Darkest Nightmare's Dread, slowly fading into the shadows. . . . . . |
| Darkest Nightmare's Dread chapter 4 . 1/16/2013 Vegetable?! I'm gonna use that in my next Dragonball fanfic, just so I can make Vegeta explode. Sotry's good so far, and will keep reading on. Until the next possible sighting, this is Darkest Nightmare's Dread, slowly fading into the shadows . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
| Guest chapter 10 . 1/12/2013 Im liking this story |
| walter.beslove chapter 4 . 12/27/2012 awesome, nuff said |
| lexgirl2001 chapter 14 . 12/18/2012 OMG BEST FF I HAVE EVER READ I LOVE YOU!(your stories) |
| liliesiris chapter 10 . 10/25/2012 Heh heh, and if she dies I can always get the dragonballs... LOL Gohan. |
| liliesiris chapter 6 . 10/25/2012 I love this! |
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/20/2012 its so amazing this fanfic |
| pal 2 chapter 13 . 9/7/2012 its incredible it sounds like a real story |
| Irish Shift chapter 6 . 8/7/2012 it was good but you should have added a threat to the GR |