| Reviews for Gohan and Videl: Our beginning |
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   Irish Shift chapter 5 . 8/7/2012 you. are. EVIL! I love it |
| The AnimatedGamer chapter 9 . 8/7/2012 So far, so great. Also, It's not Elisa, it's Erasa |
| Wicked Lovely 17 chapter 14 . 6/26/2012 loved it. :D |
| stdryughkljihhvgfchfgkg chapter 5 . 6/18/2012 keep it up...doesnt matter if its fiction...the entire thing is fiction anyways :D |
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/20/2012 hey u need to call it the spirit bomb and supreme kai is what they call him here in america |
| VIDEL chapter 4 . 12/14/2011 i realy like it it is cool i loved it and u should make more oF7O |
| sedfsdcd chapter 4 . 8/16/2011 good |
| A Changing Persona chapter 14 . 7/30/2011 Hmmm... Well. I hath a few things to say. This fic WAS too fluffy... ...but I'm sure most people loved it. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. And finally: BACON ROCKS! BACON! |
| Yoko Nenshou chapter 3 . 6/19/2010 its: "one kiss from you, im on fire" |
| whiteabyss89 chapter 2 . 4/26/2010 for writing this from memory you did a pretty good job of the events that happened. although i will say that videl already knew about the cell games and what really happened before the buu incident. and no the women were not able to watch the fight from the afterlife. but non the less i must say good job |
| Major Session chapter 14 . 11/5/2009 All I can say is wow. A truly great read, one of the best fanfic's (hell scrap fanfics just stories in general) I have ever read. You managed to make it realistic (as far as dbz goes), intimat and highly entertaining.I ecspecially (sp?) liked how you didn't portray Hercule as a complete bastard, made it much better in my opion. Can't wait to check out more of your great work, you've really got a talent for this. Thanks so much for writing this, have a great day (like Gohan ;)) |
| Soravae chapter 14 . 9/20/2009 wow,your such a talented writer. I love your stories! And I'm glad everything went alright with your wife and newborn child. My best wishes! |
| Alan J. Worthington chapter 1 . 8/9/2008 Wow...that was a great story...Like I read the entire thing half a dozen times... Except for the lemon, this should be, like, some kinda Dragonball Z movie. The lemon part was really well written. I don't know how you did it, but You really got me stuck on this story. Read "Sticks and Stones." It's another great GohanVidel fic. |
| Tayyib Shah chapter 4 . 10/25/2007 Nice Story man.. Love it. Well I personal give it... * out of * Its very good just if you tried real hard it would be even better. From Tayyib Shah |
| mischeifmaiden chapter 3 . 8/24/2007 this is really really really really really really really re-healy cool! |