Reviews for The Consequence of the Mistake
Guest chapter 3 . 3/31
you watch dragon ball z abridged don't you. props for the dadoria comment that was a great scene
Strazor chapter 15 . 8/3/2014
"But…" She stopped when she saw the look in his eyes. "Alright, later, I'll hold you to that."
Uhh just saying... He doesn't have eyes. Just pools of ki...
Dyton chapter 21 . 4/4/2014
I know that most likely you will never read this, but my hope is that since you are still a fairly active writer you will see this message. First I love you story even if it is an original story with some saiyans. I understand the sour taste so i don't blame you for abandoning the story however it leaves an even worse taste for us since we will never read the end. I am under NO circumstances stating to update; however, I wish if you could dedicate some time to give us an overview of what was to come. NOT THE NEXT CHAPTER just a general outline of where it was headed a couple of the twist and turns, the resolution, but most importantly WHO GOHAN ENDS UP WITH AT THE VERY LEAST? Please and thank you (If you are willing to let someone else adopt your story and will give them where you were headed... that info you would provide is all I am asking for)
shugokage chapter 21 . 12/21/2013
An incredible story great job!
dayvon135 chapter 21 . 11/30/2013
Please update
Pizzadude5665 chapter 21 . 11/30/2013
sucks that u wont continue this story according to u shit was about to hit the fan and gohan was gona have some badass battles and nobody even got see who he ended up with and its just a terrible ending stop for a story i was loving it now im left with nothing sucks
Pizzadude5665 chapter 18 . 11/29/2013
Pizzadude5665 chapter 17 . 11/29/2013
hahahahah the conversation with trunks and gohan was fucking great
Pizzadude5665 chapter 13 . 11/29/2013
blight is awesome i picture him as kenshi from mortal kombat i hope he joins the crew this chapter was badass
Pizzadude5665 chapter 11 . 11/29/2013
HAHAHAHAHA THIS STORY IS FUCKING GREAT VEGETA IS FUNNY BARDOCK IS BADASS GOHAN IS THE EPITOME OF A FUCKING TANK drop kick thats great i dont know even know what im typing anymore i love this story
Pizzadude5665 chapter 9 . 11/28/2013
i really do like karreth id like to see gohan with her
Pizzadude5665 chapter 7 . 11/28/2013
this chapter was hilarious hahahahahaha
Pizzadude5665 chapter 4 . 11/28/2013
this story is so fucking good i love planet vegeta gohan storys
Pizzadude5665 chapter 3 . 11/28/2013
he would tear a new sshole hahahaha i was laughing so fucking hard
Pizzadude5665 chapter 2 . 11/28/2013
i love the idea of gohan becoming a full blooded saiyan idk if he would be able 2 take gogeta
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