|Reviews for Awakenings|
| Kagome love Hiei chapter 11 . 7/30/2011
I really injoy the Story XD
| MissSecretlySinful chapter 11 . 7/29/2011
Ho ho, I love this story!
:)) I really enjoyed reading it and honestly I couldn't be happier with the way you ended Wendy and Peter's story.
So I just wanted to say thank you for giving me a great story to read!
| annonymouss chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
Truly marvelous! On to the next chapter!
| Lov ya babe chapter 4 . 7/9/2011
OMG I've been to both places and I love you right now literally!
Carrying on writing more Lemons please!
Lov ya babe xxx
| daemonwolf chapter 11 . 7/1/2011
I just stumbled on this story after a very long day involving a 250 mile move and loading/unloading of trucks, and I just wanted to say thank you. It is a beautiful coming-of-age tale; very well-written and chock full of things that make the romantic in me go "awwww".
Well done. I'm looking forward to reading your other stories... After I get some sleep, of course.
| British Writer chapter 2 . 6/20/2011
| British Writer chapter 1 . 6/20/2011
| Anon chapter 11 . 6/11/2011
Hey, Kimberly-A, I'd just like to tell you that there's a newer story out there called Becoming Pendy that borrows many sentences and occurrences, sometimes word-for-word, from your story. I'm not sure if you care, but I think people should be notified if their creative property is being used possibly without their permission. Otherwise, this was a really good story.
| Eucalyptus Mint chapter 8 . 6/9/2011
"Did things get lost in there?" Lmao! I was cracking up! :D
| Mily chapter 11 . 6/5/2011
I thought this was excellently written. I enjoyed reading every minute of it! You captured the personality and feeling that a teen boy and girl would have if they were in a situation similar to the one you've written. Thanks so much for writing this and finishing it! D
| Ms. Ann Dree chapter 11 . 5/27/2011
This is kind of sick, no offense. A beautiful fairy tale then, now and erotic adult story? Your writing style is good, it should be put to something different. You have a poetic sort of way to write. I didn't read it, except the last chapter.
| peter4ever chapter 11 . 5/19/2011
Hi, really good story and excellent descriptions regarding Peter's POV of everything around him. His innocence and lack of intelligence and knowledge of the world around him, and of men and women, only serves to make him all the more resistible. I can clearly see the 2003 actors (older now, obvs) doing and saying everything in this story.
Peter's words are so PETER, with his questions being that of a child, whilst his body and mind (the latter only slightly) maturing into that of a man. And despite her longing to fit into the rest of Edwardian England, Wendy's heart and moral compass will always point her back to Peter, the boy/man she truly belongs to, heart, body, mind and soul.
The last few chapters, especially the ones introducing the 'new' lost boys were good to keep the story going and also provided entertainment - esp. Sprout - it would be interesting to see a story about his background! ;) *hint hint* And Peter and Wendy's discussion about virginity was well executed, their dialogue fitting their personalities perfectly.
Well done on this fic, the length is good, angst is plentiful but spread out well enough and dosed to the reader in the right places, Peter and Wendy are both in character, and the appearance by Mrs. Darling is exactly what I would expect her to say - kind, loving and the feeling that she knows more and always has more to tell, despite her dealing with and addressing all of Wendy's dilemmas.
However, I would have loved to have a confrontation between Mrs. Darling and Peter, much like the scene in the book-verse where Peter argues that "We both can't have her, lady" and he shuts the nursery window. I would have also thought that Wendy would talk to the boys before she went - but without this you make the pace of the story more steady, and less complicated, focusing more on Peter and Wendy's relationship, which grows, like a pearl from a grain of sand. Overall, an excellent fic accompanied by great dialogue and exquisite descriptions.
| GhibliGirl91 chapter 11 . 5/8/2011
Eeeeeeee I found this on AFF ages ago, I'm so glad it's here. I am currently knackered and ought to be doing an essay due tomorrow but am on FF instead, same old, but that is my excuse for lack of decent review :)
All I can say is that this is beautiful and classy, as well as romantic and HAWT! So bravo, I bow down to you and hope I can one day write as well as this.
| 4evsAngryBoys chapter 11 . 5/3/2011
So so so so so happy because I re-found this story. I loved your story when I first read it, but failed to find it again after remembering it and I found it! Yay!
I love Pendy, and the way you explored their sexual lives and growing up without being full-blown porn. Loved the story :D
THANKS SO MUCH!
| paigeydoll chapter 11 . 4/19/2011
Wonderful story :) Peter and Wendy belong together! I really loved this story - and I find it quite realistic. Peter was adorably unaware of what was happening to him :)