Reviews for Awakenings
Eris Jones chapter 11 . 9/2/2012
Oh wow. You stayed so true to character and to the spirit of the Peter Pan. And (added plus) it reads almost like Adam and Eve or Pandora. You know. . . how they first figured it all out.
serima chapter 10 . 9/2/2012
This, this entire chapter made me smile and laugh. You are a fantastic writer, and I enjoy this story very much. This has been my favorite chapter!
MissMercurial chapter 10 . 8/25/2012
"the shushing disaster"

Also, Peter hiding among regular people to learn what a husband is, d'awwwww.
So many warm fuzzy feels.
ConsciousDreamer101 chapter 11 . 8/19/2012
Oh, this story was so... Beautiful! It's brilliantly written! I found this story around 11 at night, now its 12:26. Guess I better get to sleep. GoodNight. -_-
miki chapter 11 . 8/17/2012
Such a great story love it! :)
WitchyCloudpine chapter 11 . 8/15/2012
This was just wonderful!
poppy chapter 11 . 7/31/2012
You're absolutely brilliant! I loved it!
Garb chapter 11 . 7/30/2012
That. Was. BEAUTIFUL. I am so glad Peter and Wendy ended up together! And it was sexy yet intimate. Unlike most sex stories, this one actually had feeling, meaning, and a real story to it. YAY!
Smithback chapter 11 . 7/29/2012
an awesome story
LJ Summers chapter 11 . 7/22/2012
I found this delightful story on the favorites' list of another fan of yours.

I confess, even at my age, to have had fleeting fantasies along these lines over the eons since I first met Peter and Wendy but I could never make it gel in my mind how it would "work."

Thank you for this. The tone is perfection, the innocence, delightful. This is exactly the way it should be.

And Mr. Darling's most responsible snores will always be remembered, as will the exchanging of "virginities." :)

Thank you so much for a sweetly sensual conclusion. :)
Sarah chapter 11 . 7/13/2012
I havent a clue as to who you are, be it man or woman, old or young, but you have a downright hilarious perspective of an ignorant teenage boy. You managed to make the most intense and passionate chapter, the funniest one as well. You have a great story here, and i look forward to taking a glance at your other work.
Guest chapter 10 . 7/3/2012
TheAnarchist'sSuitCollection chapter 11 . 6/12/2012
Beautifully different and great. I loved it! Keep writing! :D
Norah chapter 11 . 6/5/2012
This was SUCH a fantastic story. I'll be truthful, when I saw there was 11 chapters I just knew I wasn't going to get through allbof them, but befor I knew it I was finished and smiling like an idiot. You somehow managed to portray both of the innocent behaviours Wendy and Peter would have WHILE making it smutty and mature. I gotta tell you, when Peter was talking about how he loved HIS Wendy, I got a bit emotional. This was truly a pleasure to read. Great, GREAT job.

- Norah
A Girl chapter 11 . 5/13/2012

I am 18 years old, but only because I have lived for that long. Mentally and physically, I am younger. Embarrassing as this is, I have only recently started feeling... Wendy feelings. I had a boyfriend for a year and a half my freshman and sophomore year of high school, but I never desired more than his lips, even though I loved him.

Now I'm finally understanding the world's obsession with... oh, well, you know. Anyway... I've tried to read smutty fan fiction before, but I always got a little disgusted and stopped. It seemed unrealistic and vulgar.

I read this expecting something similar. Expecting to be disappointed. I was not. In fact, I cried at times at the sheer beauty of it all. It is a perfect story. Perfect. I don't know what else to say.

When I was little, I always left my window open for Peter Pan. This year I met a boy who thought he WAS Peter Pan when he was little. :)

Thank you for this story, even though it made me guiltily imagine MY Peter Pan's face much too often.
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