|Reviews for The Elven Princess|
| Hug-a-Muffin chapter 1 . 10/22/2004
I love poems!
And this ones da bomb!
Just kepp swimming
Just keep swimming
Just keep swimming, swimming, swiming
What do we do
Lalalala la la
| Fangelir chapter 1 . 2/14/2004
Hmm. . . your rhyming is slightly iffy; it'd be a bit better if it had a consistent pattern to it. In parts it sounds slightly forced, and in others, you've just abandoned it altogether. A couple wee things that are bothering me: you know there aren't any dragon fairies in Middle-earth, right? ;) And those "~~" that you use aren't needed to separate the stanzas.
The idea itself isn't bad at all. Though I don't think there's any chances of an elf beating an ent in any duel; heck, if the ents are strong enough to break the dam of the Isen, they can crush an elf with little effort.
But anyways, yesh. Don't take this too harshly; you've got plenty of potential, and keep writing!
| Ultimate Warrior chapter 1 . 2/14/2004
It's...interesting. (forlack of a better word.
oh don't get me wrong it's a good poem but i'm not sure if it's a rhyming poem or not. it might make a good story but i just didn't get it as a poem.
as i said it is a good poem.
oh and one more thing, THIS ISN'T NOT A FLAME!
| CosmicalMadison chapter 1 . 2/13/2004
Very nice. Good ending!
| Iorhaelwen chapter 1 . 2/13/2004
its cool! i like! :) keep up the good work!