Reviews for The Elven Princess
Hug-a-Muffin chapter 1 . 10/22/2004

I love poems!

And this ones da bomb!

So remember

Just kepp swimming

Just keep swimming

Just keep swimming, swimming, swiming

What do we do

We swim

Lalalala la la
Fangelir chapter 1 . 2/14/2004
Hmm. . . your rhyming is slightly iffy; it'd be a bit better if it had a consistent pattern to it. In parts it sounds slightly forced, and in others, you've just abandoned it altogether. A couple wee things that are bothering me: you know there aren't any dragon fairies in Middle-earth, right? ;) And those "~~" that you use aren't needed to separate the stanzas.
The idea itself isn't bad at all. Though I don't think there's any chances of an elf beating an ent in any duel; heck, if the ents are strong enough to break the dam of the Isen, they can crush an elf with little effort.
But anyways, yesh. Don't take this too harshly; you've got plenty of potential, and keep writing!
Ultimate Warrior chapter 1 . 2/14/2004
It's...interesting. (forlack of a better word.
oh don't get me wrong it's a good poem but i'm not sure if it's a rhyming poem or not. it might make a good story but i just didn't get it as a poem.
as i said it is a good poem.
oh and one more thing, THIS ISN'T NOT A FLAME!
CosmicalMadison chapter 1 . 2/13/2004
Very nice. Good ending!
Iorhaelwen chapter 1 . 2/13/2004
its cool! i like! :) keep up the good work!