|Reviews for Daddy's Lullaby|
| Radioactive Cupcakes chapter 1 . 3/10/2012
I was crying so bad! This is very well done. The songs went with it perfectly. I'm still sniffling! xD
| Reaching You chapter 1 . 7/26/2007
i dont hate it! i love it, but it makes me sad.
| thoughtless dreamer chapter 1 . 6/6/2007
This was very beautiful. ANd the song that went along with it matched perfectly. I very much enjoyed the flow of the poetry, and the occasional repeatition of words. Wonderfully done
| 9095 chapter 1 . 11/3/2006
WA! I cried this is such an awesome poem yet i cry... but the again i'm realy emotional... luv this one shot/poem...i wish i could write poems like u.
| Slowlytheblooddrips chapter 1 . 6/6/2006
wow, that's a pretty powerful style of poetry if you use it right, and I think you definatly used it right, that was a really really great poem, I simply loved it, I might try using that style of poery... but i dun't know, I can't really do too good of poetry, not anymore anyway... oh well, that's a different topic that needn't be brougth up, great job!
| Kris chapter 1 . 2/13/2006
This is brilliant!
| ChibiPiracy chapter 1 . 12/8/2005
Ho-ly-crap.. I'm sobbing man.. SOBBING... dang it.. that's SAD!... holy crap. Alright alirght, decent review, I can do this (If I can see the screen threw all the tears.)
that was actually very good, very moving, wonderful and yes, I do suck at giving reviews... OFF TO READ YOUR OTHER THINGS!
| dschinni chapter 1 . 10/30/2005
*cRYS* tHAT WAS SO SWEET. i'M SITTING HERE AND CRYING.
hOW'D HE DIE?
| QueenTatooine chapter 1 . 9/1/2005
Very sad, and said with the innocence of a child. I think that innocence is what tears at the heart the most, the perspective, the haunting reality, that maybe they will forget of the one now lost and gone.
Good poem, very poignant.
| duckgirl566 chapter 1 . 8/31/2005
That was so friggin sad! I am crying now yhank you very much! How did Inuyasha die then?
| floatingfantasy chapter 1 . 8/26/2005
my fave one-shot!
| floatingfantasy chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
gosh,im crying is so heartwrenching.
| NewSalemWitch chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
Ack! I'm getting the keyboard all wet. I hope the french exchange student staying with us (or worse, my mom) comes in right now, because I absolutely *hate* it when people see me cry. And yes, your poem has made me cry harder than I have ever cried after reading fanfiction, and it's been a long time since I've cried this hard after reading a published book. (And I've actually gotten quite good at not crying since then.)
*tries to keep from starting up again* This really isn't my computer, so mom'll be mad if I mess it up. But seriously! Oh my god... I'm making all those stupid frowny faces that you make when you're trying not to cry.
Oops, hold on. I have to go give a bulletin board to my neighbor. brb.
*sniff* I'm back. And I've calmed down a little. But it was still moving and beautiful. I think I'll have to put a link up to this story in the rpgs I'm in. Is that okay with you? Email me if it's not:
Finally, I would like to say thank you for writing something so beautiful and moving. It was kind of confusing at first, but it was the *good* kind of confusing where you can catch up relatively quickly. (Did that make sense?) It was an unexpected twist, killing Inuyasha. And I'm not sure how you did it, but even before it said that his child had inherited his ears, I knew. I don't know how I knew, but I just knew.
Again, beautiful work, and wonderful job. I'm definatly going to have to read more of your work.
| Juerena chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
that was so sad it even made me cry seriously even though i know it's not true u have a real gift for poetry.
| Anora-the-Dreamer chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
That was beautiful. Personally, I think Kagome is probably going to die a lot earlier than Inuyasha. Unless he does something stupid.