Reviews for Daddy's Lullaby
Milsteria chapter 1 . 2/28/2004
That was great!
You did everything perfect,
but it was just plain sad...
and heart warming...
I loved it.
Avdevjyp chapter 1 . 2/25/2004
some really really good lines
loved it! _
Gohanzgirl chapter 1 . 2/24/2004
I hope your happy... im crying... Dangit im crying I never cry... listening to the inu yasha lullaby with this didnt help *sniffle* very very good peice of work here... Im still crying.
Yabou chapter 1 . 2/23/2004
Oh my gosh, I sang a trio version of this song last year and we won for state! "Johnny's Gone for a Soldier". It's a very beautiful song...although some of the words were different, but then again, we were singing an extended complicated version, lol. Wonderful usage, and I loved how you combined the two songs with your poem, great job.
~ Yabou ~ SL
sugaraybravo chapter 1 . 2/20/2004
Good. That was worrying me. _ Anyways... hm... I'm guessing that Uncle is Miroku, because it's really not that logical for it to be Souta... anyways, love the fic, but it's depressingful. *sniffles*
Guest chapter 1 . 2/20/2004
All I can say is...deep.
youkai chick supreme chapter 1 . 2/20/2004
aw, it was good. i liked it,
even though it was so sad.
good job, ja ne.
Hisui Rai chapter 1 . 2/20/2004
OMG! I almost cried. That was so awesome! You are a really great writer. It makes me wonder if you'll ever expand the poem into a story. But I don't think you have to. Its wonderful as it is.
Ningen Demonai chapter 1 . 2/16/2004
WAH! It's so sad! Yet absolutlely cute. What has happened to you? You went from cute, fluffy fics in InuKag to angsty ones where at least one of them dies. Oh well, it's written very well, as always. Sorry that I don't review, but I still love your fics!
RoseInuYasha chapter 1 . 2/14/2004
wa this was so sad and beautiful. i loved it so much. it's so much better then any poem i could ever write or at least that's what i think _~
FutatsuNinja chapter 1 . 2/14/2004
That was so sad! And really sweet, too, in a way. It almost made me want to cry a little, you worked the emotions very well.
kaida13 chapter 1 . 2/14/2004
That was great! I love it! (I wish my poems where that good. Mine are all about death and, so my friends say, scary creepy stuff. lol!)
Kitsune Ria chapter 1 . 2/14/2004
O_O...that was amazing. I'm about to cry right now and it's 7:36 in the morning...odd...
Oh well! I love it.
Princess-Meru chapter 1 . 2/13/2004
This was amazing. I love that song, and this story was so cute.
Angel-of-the-Elemants chapter 1 . 2/13/2004
How could anyone hae that? I am nearly at tears! I read that and in my head a sorta had a rthm with the words and so as i read in my head it sounded like a song. It was very exclant and that is comeing from a gothic punk!
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