Great story. Thanks for the read.

Solid

I’m sorry, I can tell that this probably would have been a really good story, but unfortunately it just had too much cussing and so many uses of God’s name in vain. I really tried to just push through it for the sake of the story, but it was it was like you wrote every line just thinking of any possible way that you could enter a bad word or dishonor God’s name. I can tell you’re a talented writer and I really wish that I could finished your story.

ngl, my eyes flicked to the words getting married and for a brief moment i thought there was going to be a ron/harry pairing out of the blue.
also hermione on new years eve when harry proposed had such a good connection with hannah that i wanted her to forget both boys XD
honestly you're making me want a whole hannah-centric fic!

I doubt the epilogue is going to be completely pants, so will give a review for the whole fic now. I've been really ill this week and needing something familiar and comforting. I've not read any fanfiction for a while and this has been an amazing mixture of the soft fluffiness and danger/angst which has been just what i needed. Thankyou and I hope you are able to keep writing in a way that fulfils you for a long time into the future :)

Great chapter. Enjoying how the story

I just love it all of it... 3 i read it in 3 days. now i can go to sleep and have a really a good dream. Keep writing!

Oh wow, this was really good. The ups and downs kept me on the edge, and I laughed and cried with the characters, particularly during the War scene. Great work!

great story so far, may I suggest that you space things out so it doesn't look it's blending into one, it would also be easier to read and enjoy the story

omg, such a good book! you had the drama, angst, suspense... everything was perfect! even the grammar! i really enjoyed this fanfic, and could hardly stop reading! this was amazing

keep writing,
Zainab

Draco, not wanting Pansy to be put in danger on the battlefield, showed some level of affection for her. I liked the way you allowed Pansy to die believing that Draco cared for her. She was, in this story, the innocent. Sinned against rather than the sinner she is usually portrayed as. Beautifully done.

This story is great...And the plot is very different from any dramione story I've ever read.. You got me hooked with your writing from the very begining. The plot may not be the best one out there; but this is one of the most amazing stories on .. I loved every bit of it. But I was really confused as about the timeline as you didn’t the dates

This was such a great read! I honestly couldn't stop reading until I was finished. You have such a beautiful writing style that I'm eager to see if you have any other completed stories.

I’ve really enjoyed this fic. It was recommended on a fb group & so I gave it a go. It’s well written, with no glaringly obvious plot holes, spelling or grammatical errors. It’s now on my faves list!

Sometimes, one wonders why one hasn’t started reading a popular fic like this one sooner... waaay sooner. Shame on me, man. This so so brilliant. And all the characters are so believable, so in character. Wonderful job, you.

Oh I loved this story! Draco was a low down dirty ass in the beginning, but he shaped out quite nicely there by the end. Except for that -well, you knowdeath eater thing.
I loved how you positioned him as the 'son Snape had never had' It was really beautiful how he connected with Severus, and Harry was just that sweetheart who did everything he could to ensure everyone else got a happy ending, even with his own heartbreak. I like that you didn't throw him into a last minute romance at the end (like so many fics like to do in these kinds of stories) and that he wasn't magically over Hermione. It was beautifully believable that he's taking time away to work and travel to grieve the ending of his relationship. Really beautiful writing