|Reviews for Cheater!|
| TornadoAlly chapter 1 . 2/14/2004
Hm...okay, I'm not trying to be mean, I can see you were trying hard with this and I know what it's like to come up with something really late at night. I think that all you need to do is edit this a bit (I now you said you didn't want to, but it can seriously help a story so much if you just read it over a few times.) Besides that ,I really like the dialoge, and I'm really interested to see what happens next.
| Nienna Rose chapter 1 . 2/14/2004
If it's so stupid why would anyone want to read your story? I didn't bother to. I just took your word for it. You might want to change your summary if you want people to read.