Reviews for the Bureau of Extraordinarys
ElvenBookwyrm chapter 4 . 7/20/2004
Okay, your story is pretty good... but your spelling and grammar stinks. Try to look for a beta reader, or at the very least, use a spell checker. Don't give me any crap about English not being your first language (if it isn't, write in your first language, then) or being dislexic (you may be, but your spell checker won't be).
Princess Shido chapter 2 . 4/22/2004
Story Good. Plot Good. Duncan good. Methos better. Way better.
S.M chapter 2 . 3/19/2004
can't wait for more,please update as soon as possible
Anonymous chapter 2 . 2/21/2004
No offence, but you really need to proofread before you post things on fanfic. It's actually a requirement. If you can't do that, then geta someone to do it for you (a Beta reader). You also switch back and forth with script format and story format, something that's pretty confusing.
This story has a lot of potential. But it needs a lot of work as well. Good luck!