Reviews for Two Birds and a Burning Sun
Guest chapter 9 . 11/17/2014
That was good
Guest chapter 2 . 7/19/2013
RyuKaisir chapter 3 . 5/22/2011
The 'Tamaranian three-eyed Mucklog soup' does sound like something Starfire would say. Beast Boy has ALWAYS been in love with himself.

So in short a very believable and interesting story.
Waterlily-Clone chapter 1 . 5/8/2005
ShadowGryphyn chapter 3 . 4/30/2005
you spelled friends firends once. other than that, i didn't see anything bad at all!
ni9htdreame12 chapter 9 . 3/13/2005
rav&rob please!
Ashley chapter 9 . 3/6/2005
Okay i really liked many of all ur fanfics but one girl has to win robin over.(which i really hope is raven).stop beating around the bush and get to the seems like a real player in ur fanfics (which is totally not him and ur

making rae look like a complete fool 4 not seeing that robin's using them both).And as 4 cy getting bb pregnant that's JUST WRONG!so u better shape up if u want people reading ur fanfics
breathless16 chapter 9 . 1/19/2005
ha! those outtakes were hilarious. anyway, this was a really good story. you rock! off to readthe next one.
BlackWolf4830 chapter 1 . 12/7/2004
Um... okay, this was disturbingly odd. You're not trying to make fun of Beast Boy are you? That's my only argument for the fan fic. Sorry for the negative review.
ConGamer chapter 3 . 7/1/2004
Your story is really good, and I like how you incorporate little elements from the show into the verbal fabric. :) You dialogue feels really true also.

However, you could use a little work on your fight scenes. Yours kind of read like a play-by-play commentator calling the fight - it's descriptive, but doesn't really give the flavor of the fight. Fight scenes are REALLY hard to write, so don't sweat it. :)

Good job!
Phazon Droid chapter 9 . 4/11/2004
Great, but this won't turn into something freaky, will it?
Quidditch-Gal chapter 9 . 3/29/2004
Nice work
A toilet chapter 9 . 3/26/2004
nyaanyaanyaa chapter 9 . 3/24/2004
nyaanyaanyaa chapter 3 . 3/24/2004
this is good so far.
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