|Reviews for Reality of Dreams|
| BlueEyedElf chapter 11 . 8/22/2005
Yay, Elrohir is saved! Thank goodness for Glorfindel and Traven. They truly saved the day. I'm glad Traven decided to do the right thing.
Poor Elladan. It's been a rough couple of days for him. It must have been really hard for him when his escape attempt failed and Elrohir took the punishment for it. Again, thank goodness for Glorfindel and Traven. I was also very sweet when Elladan pleaded with the guys who were taking Elrohir back to Rivendell to be careful. Something tells me he is going to hover over his brother for quite some time.
This was a really great chapter and I look forward to the last one, although I am sad to see this great story ending. When Elladan gets back home, I hope he finds Elrohir already recovering. It will probably be some time before he is completely well, however. I have a feeling they will both be getting an earful from some very upset parents (and Glorfindel. Great job!
| WarriorElf chapter 11 . 8/22/2005
Too lazy to log in. again. Anyhoo. *hands Nefcairiel a cookie* It's a magic cookie, and it's whatever kind you want it to be.
This was a good chapter. Just one comment: Alright isn't a word. It's really All right, but that's what happens when you ask grammar geeks to review. *grin* Anyhow, I'm looking forward to the next, and last chapter. I'm sad it's the last, but it must be a relief to you, even if a small one.
| pipinheart chapter 11 . 8/21/2005
This was the best! Elladan finds his brother only to find his luck isn't very good...Poor thing...He heals Elrohir to have his excape plan didn't work and watching his brother get hurt...
Glorifindel was a sight for sore eyes and they are now on the way home... Elrohir is going to hear it from his brother... I liked the character Damus he wasone I got to like, who knows they could meet again...Please continue...I like your characterisation of the twins great job...
| WarriorElf chapter 10 . 8/20/2005
Do not fret, you have not lost my interest! I eagerly await the next installment. This was a well-written chapter, even if it wasn't full of action. It was still good, and you write the thought process well. Your characters, especially Elrond, Elrohir, and Elladan are believable and three dimensional. Keep up the good work!
| Viresse chapter 10 . 8/17/2005
I feel bad for Elladan, it's not fair for Elrond to give such a comment to him - Elladan is looking for his twin, he must be worried sick.
After reading this chapter, I'm thinking that sometimes, no matter how we want to prevent something to happen, it would happen anyway - then, I wonder if Elrohir can truely "save" Elladan from what he saw in his dream. Though, as you said you just have two more chapters, I don't think you would do a twist now.
Anyway, I would follow this story till its end. I hope you'd update soon.
| pipinheart chapter 10 . 8/15/2005
This is so great...Love it...Poor Elrohir, he is in need of help...Can his brother get him out in time...Please continue...
| BlueEyedElf chapter 10 . 8/15/2005
Don't worry. You haven't lost my interest.
Once again, Damus is a really cute character. I'm glad Elladan has him along on this rather haphazard rescue mission.
I sure hope everything turns out okay for all of them. It's true that Elrohir needs treatment fast, but I hope Elladan doesn't let his worry impair his good judgement. However, he's already done that, hasn't he by refusing to backtrack for reinforcements? Maybe Damus will be able to keep him out of trouble.
I'm still really enjoying this story and look forward to the next update. Please don't keep me in suspense for too long. However, don't worry about losing my interest. I'll continue to watch this story until it is finished.
| random person chapter 10 . 8/15/2005
I don't think you lost any interest shown in this story. It's too good for that. Please update soon.
| Lady Luce chapter 1 . 8/15/2005
This is really great, I'd read more, but I have writing to do and food to eat and my bedroom to tidy, maybe I'll just stay on here for a few minutes though. *an hour later, still staring at screen after finishing chapter 10* when will she update? When will she update?
| Coolio02 chapter 10 . 8/15/2005
*cheers* Yay, an update!
Hey, you haven't lost my interest at all!:-) Good chapters and I can't wait to read the next one:-)
| JennyJoy4 chapter 8 . 6/5/2005
Where's the next chapter?
| WarriorElf chapter 9 . 3/6/2005
You must update soon! I do not know how long I can wait for an update; I must know what happens!
This is really well written and quite enjoyable! I love your style and the amount of detail you add to the story line. A lot of ff.n writers do not add enough detail.
I also really like how you add suspense to the situation by having the twins make bad decisions. They don't just listen to what they're told and lie about moaning about their missing twin. They try to do something about it, and they get in trouble...
Poor Elrond. Do be good to him, wont you? And the twins too. But you can beat them up some more, as long as you don't kill them. 'Cause then I can comfort them...
| WarriorElf chapter 8 . 3/4/2005
oh no oh no oh !
You can't *do* that to Elrohir! Well, I guess you can, and I would in that situation (yours, I mean, not thos Evil! men...) but...Poor Elrohir...
I'm a bad reviewer. But I like your story a lot!
| WarriorElf chapter 3 . 3/4/2005
Wow, this is really amazing. I love the twist that it's Elrohir being the 'bad guy', though of course he's not really bad.
I wonder if that root is really just a sleeping herb...somehow I bet not. Maybe I'm wrong...
| JennyJoy4 chapter 9 . 3/2/2005
This is fascinating! Please update!