Well... if magic fixes Jack.. too bad for the Asgard? Unless you use magic to take care of the replicators too.. hmm

The plot is thickening.. like the pancakes!

Actually I take it back. This is Xander from late in canon. I stopped caring for Xander during/after the failed wedding episode.

So you've made me care about a character I intentionally stopped caring about.

Ok... I'm not sure about the actual story (it's too soon).

But you know the words of death for a story? "I don't care what happens to these characters". That doesn't apply.
Obviously I care for the original characters, but you've made me care about this version of both Xander and Jack. (everyone else hasn't had enough screen time so I can't pass judgement yet).
Not quite sure how you pulled it off in a single chapter but you did.

So.. good so far:)

Imagine how disappointed you'd be to find out your son was that loser xander. Everything about him, especially that ghey name, is cringe.

What about Halloween?That was ruined by a human and a god,not by a demon

cool

Great story! Love the plot and the growing relationship between Jack and Xander.

Great story.

Great Story, Brilliant XOver. Recommended Read, 10/10,. Mach2 Out!

im done with this story. its a whole lot of the slayer and friends being super condescending and smug about a whole lot of shit. they are unlikable. good luck.

i really really REALLY want to skip the crazily condescending "your ignorant and stupid because you dont believe in ghosts!" but im not sure if it stops

until you do you dont know me. what a douchey way to end a conversation.

Nice.

I'd think he was in a gang if I were jack