Reviews for Paid in Full
EverVengeful chapter 39 . 7/27/2005
well? update! your story is AMAZING. just so you now, when you put stuff in italics, it shows up like this: iwhat you wrote/i i know there's some wort of name for that, but i can't remember it at the moment. i had the same problem, but i found that if i wrote it the i on my computer, then it showed up in italics on just a quick note, if only because i'd hate to see ANYTHING detract from your otherwise flawless writing.
scarlet note chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
Alinnya is so bold and incredible! I love the unexpectd plot, and your first chapter draws the reader so succesfully.
Istani chapter 30 . 1/8/2005
Finally! I've tried to sign in the whole day to tell you how much I like your story but fanfiction didn't let me. Now I'm here. Why have I missed it? I read the prologue and was captured. Of all the love stories aroud this is one of the best. I really like all the different sides of Alinnya and the way you portayed her. Finally not one of these teenage and noble-born woman who win Jack's heart. And you did a great job with the *grin* 'adult oriented' szenes as I know how hard it is to write about sex without getting either too pornographic or too sentimental; it's just... er, inspiring. Please do update soon and take your time until it comes to an end. You're in my favourite list
Kenshin13 chapter 39 . 12/27/2004
Why are these chapters so short? I love this story to much for these little tidbits! Anyway great job and I will be on the edge of my seat for the next installment!
ash chapter 38 . 12/20/2004
i love the story but im not sure i quite understand this chapter. is the italics part of the letter? and why exactly are they all dressed up and going to this rich party?
JohnnyDeppsLover chapter 38 . 12/8/2004
Hey I just saw your fanfic a couple days ago and it looked REALLY good so I decided to print it all out and read it. And I just finished reading it today, and it is by far the best fan fic I have ever read, no jokes. I was just wondering if you were done with updating it or not. I'm interested in what would happen next, so I hope you don't stop updating it. Cause I love it! But yeah, I just wanted to know that. And if you are done with it, I was wondering if you were going to write another PotC fanfic. Well I hope you do both, and I wanted to let you know I think the story was amazing. When I read it I actually felt like I was there in the story. And your content it so descriptive and the words you use, wow, it's hard to explain because it's so good. I could go on for a long time telling you all the good things about your story, but just to sum it up, I LOVED IT! It's a outstanding fanfic, and I really hope you keep writing it, because I'm anxious for more.
PEROXIDE chapter 38 . 11/30/2004
he wouldnt leave her for a whore right?HE cant!no!
Jacky chapter 38 . 11/29/2004

I was wondering, do you still update this fanfic? Cos I love it, I absolutly do, and I can't wait to read more!

Let me know!


Aryanne chapter 2 . 11/23/2004
Definitely interesting. I'm a Jack Sparrow fan for sure. Johnny Depp! Okay. I'm not that much of a fan girl.
Kenshin13 chapter 38 . 11/20/2004
God I love updates!(maybe a little longer next time?) Your story rocks especially the line about how the pirate in Jack was trying to plan how to walk out with the chandelier! That had me laughing outloud! Great Job!
PEROXIDE chapter 37 . 10/26/2004
wo ho! keep em coming please?
Kenshin13 chapter 37 . 10/26/2004
Perfect, just perfect! You are the best writer in the entire world!
Jacqueline chapter 37 . 10/23/2004
I absolutely love your story, it had me captivated for an hour, while I folded my laundry. I do hope updates are coming because I am engrossed in what happens next. You make this story more your own than the movie's, and that is all the better.
Marvel chapter 36 . 10/18/2004
Great story. I'm very sorry I just got around to reading it. The suspence almost would have been fun. A little dark, but then the good ones always are. I love Alinnya. Nice name, by the bye, but I like the good, strong female even better. Keep up the good work.
Ani Sparrow chapter 37 . 10/16/2004
Wow! I wish there had been photography in those days! :D

Hm, not too sure about Roland...
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