|Reviews for The Art of Transformation|
| beverlysue chapter 2 . 8/6
Love both the chapters I hope one day you do write narutos part thanks for writing it
| Tam-PokeS chapter 2 . 3/22
it's "funny" when you know that in canon, Naruto decided to never give up on Sasuke, while he does quite the opposite in this.
I personally thinks that this characterization is really interesting, and I see how you could see Naruto's character like that.
I love to imagine that Naruto actually does not hate Sasuke in this, but I guess I'll never know...
| Obsessed Lass chapter 2 . 10/26/2016
Good heavens! The angst was overwhelming. Beautifully tragic.
| sa chapter 2 . 9/17/2016
Dropping a line in case you're still getting alerts from this site...
Came across this while going through old bookmarks, and I'm so glad I had the sense to add it! (I was not a frequent bookmarker in my Naruto days)
It's so good it hurts to read; characterization feels spot on and would have made more sense than the actual canon. The second chapter even makes me hate canon!Sasuke a little less.
| silvertonguedmaiden chapter 2 . 7/27/2016
oh god..so much angst...
| moodysavage chapter 2 . 7/14/2015
Wow. That was so bittersweet with an emphasis on the bitter. Very well done. It would be very satisfying to finish with a Naruto pov chapter because it would be the whole team but it sure is sad for all of them.
| kizukatana chapter 2 . 6/21/2015
This is amazing and heartbreaking. I don't even know really what to say (and the story has been here long enough that probably you will never see this note) but I love it. Because I am a simple girl, I want there to be a happy ending, but I still love it like this, with the emotions raw and torn. Thank you so much for writing this!
| Manillalu chapter 2 . 1/10/2015
| GoTrinba chapter 2 . 1/1/2014
I really enjoyed this! It's not often that I like reading about an obsessed Sasuke as opposed to an obsessed Naruto, but with this story I could totally see Sasuke's grief and it was utterly heartbreaking! The first chapter was a little confusing for me, because I didn't let myself read the last couple of lines that reveal it had been Sakura all along. So I was stunted and not sure what had been going on. Until I made it to the end lol But Sasuke how much pain and how much love he has for Naruto that he does that w/ Sakura. And Sakura too, what a sad cycle, and how sad that sakura had more strength than Sasuke to end it. Gosh I would love to read a continuation of this. Naruto's feelings seem so unlike him I would want to know his feelings now and then I want his feelings to change for poor sasuke and fall for him. But that would be really hard to pull off with sasuke having killed iruka sensei wow! Anyways, thanks for writing this story I really liked it!
| Khaos Killer chapter 1 . 4/18/2013
Wow just wow...really liked reading this story as it was very real to the point and kudos for being sneaky to the end...would just love a follow up by naruto's view point
| Addiction chapter 2 . 3/19/2013
Amazing. Loved the plot twist in the first chapter and Sasuke's thoughts in the second. Very realistic.
| Toolazytologg chapter 1 . 2/23/2012
(CrissyPalXD): Woah, I honestly didn't see that coming until Sasuke started apologizing. You're really good at... Uh. Hiding things I guess.
And writing porn. Lets not forget about that.
You're a really good writer in general.
| DrJuly chapter 2 . 2/15/2012
ow this is amazing :) I've read this one ages ago and been searching for it in the net ever since then, simply amazing keep up the good work. I love this angsty Sasuke, he's just so yummy and full of feelings, we don't see him like that often. I'm looking forward to Naruto's version... and wouldn't you consider a sequel. For example one where Naruto finally forgives him and they have angsty yet smexy luv?
| drjuly chapter 2 . 12/6/2011
OMG! you've got to continue this, pleaseeeee! I'm dying! it's so touching!. and have you thought about continuing the plot? as in not just writing naruto's pov but progressing the story?
| CosimaBlackfyre chapter 2 . 9/6/2010
That was so sad but beautiful.. I hope u right Narutos part one day.