Reviews for Haste
KristalShaga chapter 1 . 9/10/2005
Uuh... Okay... 0_o First of all I can't understand what the characters are saying and next you got your grammer. And the way you put things in sentences For example: But they would tell. It's suppose to be But they wouldn't! Tell. Why would they tell if they wouldn't? This story's grammer doesn't make any sense so please fix it! Ever try skimming through your work and checking to see if there was something wrong with it? I mean come on! Even Sherlock Holmes couldn't get all of these errors corrected! Do better with your next chapter and I won't be so harsh on this story anymore.