Reviews for Intangible Idea
Okinawa Girl chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
I loved it! I like everyone's pov
dragongoddess13 chapter 1 . 2/20/2009
Wow that was great! i loved the way you wrote Vegeta. still in caracter while admiting his feelings. i also liked the way you wrote in the other characters with the sun set. very nice!
Bootsie chapter 1 . 7/30/2007
Way to keep it IC, hon!

Good fic. I didn't see any grammatical issues, and though your vocabulary could use a LITTLE expansion, it's a tiny thing. And you know what they say: When the critics start poking at the little things, you know that you've done a good job. D

I think I'll have to read more from you!

Bootsie
Musette Fujiwara chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
Awesome...

I loved it how it ends...
Sailor Pandabear chapter 1 . 7/26/2006
nice, funny and great
Darth Luke Skywalker chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
Oops, I think I read everything out of order. *sheepish grin* Since your first fic is so long, I'm going to start on it tomorrow. I have to say, you have really done a great job. Keep it up! ;D

-ssjprincesscat
Sutsuki-chan chapter 1 . 7/7/2005
That was... *stands speechless* ahh... *dies* *comes back to life* OMG! That was so CUTE! ALL of it! AMAZING! I CAN'T PUT IT INTO WORDS, DAMMIT! *breathes* I laughed, I cried... no seriously, I did both. I've already read about half of Vegeta in the Afterworlds, and this makes me want to finish it... NOW! You are SUCH a talented writer! No flaws, original plots, completely kawaii scenes... incredible! If there's one fic on this whole site I bet could be animated and made into a movie for all to see, this would be it! Okay... I'll just go read the rest now... again, you're amazing!
vegetafanic1 chapter 1 . 6/28/2005
Great! I LOVE his! So cute! And sweet! I really LOVE THIS!
Dancing-Girl-rilla chapter 1 . 12/27/2004
Loved it Loved it. I had just finished reading "Vegeta in the Afterworlds"( which was totally amazing!) when I read this, and it is the perfect follow up story! Granted, I

[i]am[/i] a sucker for anything with BV romance ;0), but this one is one of the few that will make it onto my favorite's list.

Thanks for a thoroughly enjoyable read! Keep up the good writing!
Adriana Mendez chapter 1 . 10/27/2004
THAT WAS SO ROMANTIC! I HOPE THAT YOU WILL WRITE SOME MORE BV FICS. JA NE!
sweets427 chapter 1 . 7/29/2004
i really liked this story
KyLewin chapter 1 . 6/4/2004
A very sweet and touching ending to the story. Good job!
Penthisileia chapter 1 . 6/4/2004
GREAT! What more can i say?
Phantom 1 chapter 1 . 6/3/2004
Wow, that was even more heartwarming than the ending of your first story. I liked all the songs.
Leelo Forever chapter 1 . 5/19/2004
you are awsome! thats it..yes its my final answer-you are a fabulos writer. i only got up to the 3rd chatper of vegeta in the after worlds...but i'm going to go read it now. i mean...this story was spectatcular. i think u really rounded everything off really well. are u sure u ain't akira toryama...ARE U POSTIVE? ok then. mean..i think they should squeeze this in and make it an episode..well..they might censor it..but...i mean..i'm freaking out becasue its THAT GOOD! the b/v moments were so...adorable, impassioned, sweet, classic yet original, sensual (cool word 2), and so so...SO SPECTACULARLY WONDERFULLY COMPLETLEY, TOTALLY...AMAZING. ITS SOO..IT CAN'T BE COMPARED TO ANYTHING ELSE. i think..this is what really should've happend after vegeta cam back from fighting with buu.
thank you..u r a very great author..and...this story rocks my socks!
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