|Reviews for Intangible Idea|
| Patgilmore chapter 1 . 10/12/2017
Great story, loved it!
| vegeta and future trunks chapter 1 . 5/5/2015
That was cute, very funny, would have liked a full lemon though :'( and whose Sen?
| Okinawa Girl chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
I loved it! I like everyone's pov
| dragongoddess13 chapter 1 . 2/20/2009
Wow that was great! i loved the way you wrote Vegeta. still in caracter while admiting his feelings. i also liked the way you wrote in the other characters with the sun set. very nice!
| Bootsie chapter 1 . 7/30/2007
Way to keep it IC, hon!
Good fic. I didn't see any grammatical issues, and though your vocabulary could use a LITTLE expansion, it's a tiny thing. And you know what they say: When the critics start poking at the little things, you know that you've done a good job. D
I think I'll have to read more from you!
| Musette Fujiwara chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
I loved it how it ends...
| tanithlipsky chapter 1 . 7/26/2006
nice, funny and great
| Darth Luke Skywalker chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
Oops, I think I read everything out of order. *sheepish grin* Since your first fic is so long, I'm going to start on it tomorrow. I have to say, you have really done a great job. Keep it up! ;D
| Sutsuki-chan chapter 1 . 7/7/2005
That was... *stands speechless* ahh... *dies* *comes back to life* OMG! That was so CUTE! ALL of it! AMAZING! I CAN'T PUT IT INTO WORDS, DAMMIT! *breathes* I laughed, I cried... no seriously, I did both. I've already read about half of Vegeta in the Afterworlds, and this makes me want to finish it... NOW! You are SUCH a talented writer! No flaws, original plots, completely kawaii scenes... incredible! If there's one fic on this whole site I bet could be animated and made into a movie for all to see, this would be it! Okay... I'll just go read the rest now... again, you're amazing!
| vegetafanic1 chapter 1 . 6/28/2005
Great! I LOVE his! So cute! And sweet! I really LOVE THIS!
| Dancing-Girl-rilla chapter 1 . 12/27/2004
Loved it Loved it. I had just finished reading "Vegeta in the Afterworlds"( which was totally amazing!) when I read this, and it is the perfect follow up story! Granted, I
[i]am[/i] a sucker for anything with BV romance ;0), but this one is one of the few that will make it onto my favorite's list.
Thanks for a thoroughly enjoyable read! Keep up the good writing!
| Adriana Mendez chapter 1 . 10/27/2004
THAT WAS SO ROMANTIC! I HOPE THAT YOU WILL WRITE SOME MORE BV FICS. JA NE!
| sweets427 chapter 1 . 7/29/2004
i really liked this story
| KyLewin chapter 1 . 6/4/2004
A very sweet and touching ending to the story. Good job!
| Penthisileia chapter 1 . 6/4/2004
GREAT! What more can i say?