|Reviews for Side Effects|
| falsepermanence chapter 2 . 4/14/2019
im confused. i thought this was a mission and they were pretending. why are they having sex?¿
| falsepermanence chapter 1 . 4/14/2019
just a note. sakura's a girl so she wouldn't be called sakura"-kun" unless she was male or a trans male. the japanese honorific "-kun" is specifically reserved for men and boys, of the same age or younger than you. someone older than her like iruka would most like not use an honorific for her, or as a former sensei, use her last name only. the honorifics that WOULD fit women wouldn't fit here, like "-chan" which is more of a gender neutral honorific but specifically reserved for individuals you have affection for or find cute or for young children (iruka-sensei would probably only call naruto, naruto-chan, but that really depends on how the fanfic writer chooses to portray their relationship); "-san" is like mr. or mrs. in american culture almost so it would only be used for those older than you or of the same rank/standing as you out of respect, not for those younger than you; or the wildly-out-there "-hime" which is used for actual princesses. i just thought i should let you know to help you be more authentic in portraying aspects of japanese culture.
| Angelbratt chapter 23 . 7/9/2018
hi, I just remembered this story and I thought I'd check if you were alive. Thanks for writing, I hope you're okay.
| naruto uchia chapter 23 . 3/4/2018
this is a grate story but I would like to know when iruca is going to have his baby
| CelestialWinter90 chapter 23 . 1/31/2018
So, I will gladly admit to devouring your story in its entirety in less than 24 hours. Pardon my French, but, I FUCKING LOVED IT! Though I will admit that I am sad to see that your story never made it to its complete fruition. Sadly it most likely never will too, because from my observations you haven't been active on here since 2005-ish (it has been well over a decade, so I have my doubts of you're ever coming back). No worries though, because I will not make the demand of you that you MUST make an update. I completely understand that as time passes, lives continue on and get busy. It is understandable, and almost inevitable, that things will ultimately fall to the wayside. Anyways though... To put it simply, I just wanted to give you my praise. You are an incredibly good writer ChibiRisu-chan, capable of expressing your thoughts in a way that is translatable and relatable to your fans. Within this story you have a multitude of wonderful one liners that I personally just love! Also, at certain points your story really hit home with me, in an almost indescribable way. ChibiRisu-chan, the best way to say this is that your way of capturing the human experience and putting it into word form is scarily, amazingly, accurate. At certain points I found myself wondering if maybe you had been observing my life somehow because several of the situations you created, and the emotions that you invoked in me, it was almost like you were inside my head. It was amazing to me that you were capable of doing that. It just made this story all that more addicting for me that I felt that I could empathize, and understand, the situations that you put into play. Another writing characteristic I love about your work is your ability to create humor. I laughed consistently throughout this story, your humor made such a difference. It also helped to counter balance all the drama and angst, which rounded out your story in a very fulfilling way. Lastly, rule number one to writing is conflict equals drama. You excel at achieving this! If you are capable of creating drama (which you are) then you are capable of consistently creating situations in which to entice fans to continue reading. I will follow you and this story in hopes that maybe someday you return to it and finish it. I'd love to see an ending and get answers to all the questions that you have left me with.
| CelestialWinter90 chapter 6 . 1/30/2018
Best line I have ever read, "My mommy said I came from the back of the barn." XD Where did you ever find that gem?! I love it. Great chapter, awesome story, I am enjoying it thoroughly so far. 3
| Shyne chapter 22 . 12/27/2017
It's almost 1am in the morning where I live and m reading this while hiding under a blanket whilst holding my laughter in so as not to get busted lmao. Also I love you so much author Chan.. wish you were on wattpad so the readers could connect with you a lot better.. but you're too busy for all that anyway... I just wanna hug you and marry you for this chapter... It's even better than the previous ones.. Also I'm a super straight female , so asking you to marry me is really sayin' something's jkjk... but i love you for writing this book for a hungry reader like me. 3
| Shyne chapter 21 . 12/27/2017
Can we just appreciate the fact that you're such an amazing writer author Chan. Also I absolutely love the chibi scenarios you write. They're so funny and imagining those chibi characters do all the stuff is even more adorable fjsjsjjdjd... I love you so much for this whole story... 3
| Shyne chapter 20 . 12/27/2017
Omg the starting and ending chibi risu Chan and other character's scenarios are too adorable *dies squealing and hugging the phone screen in an imaginary attempt to hug the living daylights out of all thr chibi
| Shyne chapter 8 . 12/26/2017
I just died while reading how cruel the students are and yes kakashi has to explain in detail because he isn't the one to get flustered rather he'd be glad to get the students to scatter halfway through his detailed description of how sexy Burma's butt cheeks are lmao..
| Flybyn1ght chapter 7 . 12/2/2017
Gah. This is utterly hysterical and beautiful at the same time. Kakashi passionately declaring his love for Iruka while the eggs are merrily burning down the kitchen. And then the flour. And then the Suiton jutsu. I think I'm in love with you.
| xXFoxlightXx chapter 23 . 11/4/2017
OMG! This is so well written! I could imagine Kakashi standing right next to me giving Naruto and Sasuke the beat down! I could also hear Kakashi's voice dripping with poison and general pissed-off-ness, I can't wait to read more! Keep it up!
| bananabog chapter 23 . 11/2/2017
I know you'll likely never read this message, but still, I'm posting this anyway.
I first read this story a LONG time ago... I'm talking more than a decade, I'm talking like when Naruto was still the new hot manga/anime that had everyone in a tizz, when people were still wondering if Yondaime truly was Naruto's dad. To date... despite that it's stopped at Chapter 23, and will likely never update again - it's still one of my FAVORITE mpreg fics, ever.
This fic has been my favorite for so many reasons, and KakaIru wasn't even a pairing I cared about. I absolutely loved the interactions you had between Kakashi and Iruka, their banter, Kakachi's wildly inappropriate comments and Iruka turning from a dolphin to a shark in the blink of an eye, the whole tenderness of the whole pregnancy and everything, Iruka wearing down Sasuke enough to talk with him AND the revelation of why he made a better person to approach Sasuke instead of Kakashi... I could go on and on about how much I love this story, nearly every part of it is a delight. I absolutely still love the part where the children chart Iruka's progress on the wall -
it stands out so much in my head as one of the sweetest things I've ever come across in any preg fic.
You've probably moved on with your life and whatnot, and I hope things are a lot better for you, wherever you are. I don't have any expectations of this to be completed, of course, but I figured it was due time to leave a comment on this thing which I've quietly kept at the back of my mind for a good part of a decade to squee over whenever I need something to pick me up. Your writing is just an absolute joy to read, and it's so descriptive (Kakashi's freaking poetry every time he hits on Iruka, man) and easy to follow. I hope you're doing well with life in general, as well as whatever you're writing for (if you're still in fandoms, or writing, or maybe you've even started on your own original work!). Thank you for creating this work.
| OpalIstas chapter 23 . 4/18/2017
I just found this little gem, and it's pretty amazing. I usually skip mpregs because they are so damn biologically implausible and then skip over all the issues and emotions that comes with that kind of situation. I know it's been a long time since this has been updated. And that's ok. If the muse is dead or in deep hibernation, then that's how it is. I'm just glad that you left up 23 fantastic chapters to be found and enjoyed.
| Dark-ekin chapter 23 . 5/30/2016