Reviews for Side Effects
Lenea89 chapter 23 . 8/18/2009
I love this story! Normally I'm not a fan of Mpreg, but you actually made it believable, Not to mention hilarious. _
shigemoto chapter 1 . 8/9/2009
This is one of the best stories I've read here. Not a pairing that I usually favor, but the summary was catching. Expected a level of absurdity, but you make the premise believable and incredibly touching. This is more than fluff, it's truly romantic. I'm thoroughly enjoying the depth of the characters and complications of gender-identity crises, pregnancy, and relationships. This is very well done, can't wait for more. THANK YOU.
Lila Priceless chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
It's hard to think of words for this story without launching into squeals of fangirl madness. This is so well written and in character that it makes sense. (It that comment itself makes sense -). I'm still not sure if I really like the Kakashi and Iruka romantic pairing since there is too much weak wimpy Iruka but I love how you kept Iruka strong, even with the sexy no jutsu and pregnancy. Great job. I'm going to check out your other works. I've added this story to my alerts in case real life ever calms down and your inspiration returns.
xx QuietContemplation xx chapter 7 . 7/25/2009
If this was written any other way, I wouldn't like it all (Kakashi x Iruka isn't my favorite pairing). But your writing is hilarious! I'm definitely reading more.
Jennifer chapter 23 . 7/16/2009
Hi. I noticed that you have not finished your master piece and I thought it would be nice if you knew how terrific your story is. So I decidd to post this. I hope your housing situation has gotten better. For certain I hope that you are have recieved a better paying job so that you don't have to work one full time and two part time ones just to pay for your house. Why don't you sell copies of your story. I know I would pay at least $50 for what you have written. When it is finished I would probly pay $100. Is there a way that your fans could commision you to finish your wonderfull work, or is that frowned upon? What about paying to print your story out? I just figured that is great as your story is you have got to have a large fan base that would be willing to pay a price to help you be able to wrtite and still pay the bills. Thanks for the read. I love it. Yours is the first story like this that I ever became addicted to. Good luck with everything.
Azhwi chapter 23 . 7/13/2009
Wow . . . I don't know if you are still around - but I followed a mention of one of your other stories on to here.

It's HILARIOUS! Several times I was laughing out loud and there are many more moments in the story that I will have to pick out some how. I swear there's something back 8 chapters or so where Kakashi says something ridiculous. Somewhere after Iruka mentions watermelon seeds for the first time.

Oh yes there it is - I read back a bit - It was where Kakashi was playing at being a bog the second time and Sakura told him no doggy treats.

I'm sure it as something else though . . .

If you don't mind - I'm going to save a copy of this to my hard drive so I can read it again.

Mentioning stories vanishing off the internet has me spooked. This is too good a story to lose!

Thank you so much for writing this!

PS _ Friggin SCARY Kakashi at the end there!

I hope that life has somewhat settled down in the past 4 years?
NarutoVixin chapter 23 . 7/11/2009
oh dear i seams that Kakashi has lost it just a little bit. oh well the boys did start it this time and he gets to put them to work and maby in the end get his mind to pop That question of a certon little teacher. out side of a few miss placed kuns that should have been chans this tale is very well done ill be waiting for the next chapter
LoveAi chapter 23 . 7/4/2009
The main reason I actually got this account is so I could tell you how much I love this story! It flows amazingly, it really plays on your takes of the characters' personalities, it shows the way the characters would deal with all the situations...I am a huge fan of Kakashi, and I just love the way you see him, and I love the way you have him interacting with Iruka. It just...the whole thing pulls together for an amazing whole that I want to read over and over and over again. I can't wait for the next chapter! It's going to be the best yet, I know it!

You're an amazing author, and I love that about you because a lot of people online (not just here, because I'm not so sure about here, since I'm rather new) don't have such good grammar, and they don't care about spelling and grammar and it makes me wince to read stuff like that, but you...your grammar is impeccable, as is your spelling. So, thank you for that.

OK, I'm done. I'll go back into my corner and squeal over the well-writtenness of your story. Ciao!
lizharman9 chapter 7 . 6/19/2009
i was laughing so hard at this last part that i nearly woke my sister up
Jennifer chapter 23 . 6/19/2009
I really enjoyed your story. It was the best one ever. PLEASE tell me hat you are going to finish it. I need to know what happened. Your writting is addictive. I started with the first chapter and could not stop until I had read it all. I find myself wondering about their love child. I am so glad you allowed Sasuke to open up a little to Iruka. That was great. I can't help but wonder what Tsunade is going to say or do to them, well most likely Kakashi. I must say that I believe you are a really talented writter and I would love to read more of your work if you have any available. IDue to your creativity I have just decided that I want to open a site like yours and try my hand at writting. Although I must admitt that I will never come close to writting with all the skill that you have. I must ask where did you learn to write like that? You gave each character the appropriate emotional responsesw and showed them in their true forms. I was very surprised that you did not even need to change their personalities at all. Please continue writting, and definately finishe this wonderful story you have masterminded.




I look forward to your grand finale.
bookworm32484 chapter 23 . 6/4/2009
I like the story. I was wondering if you are going to finish the story.
sholmesley chapter 9 . 6/4/2009
Iruka- dragging the ear...



"the construction men's agreement read "Pregnant women with power tools and hormonal mood swings are very, very rough on the workplace injury record.""

I'm crying I'm laughing so hard.

Thank you- that was hilarious :D
Blood Zephyr chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
Hey there... You may recognize my name from LJ...and your response to my "whiny" comment was ... surprising to say the least... I mean first I complemented your writing ability, and then I mentioned how sex in the story would have been...nice. I didn't expect you to get pissed off at me... Though I understand how that could happen considering the other stuff you were dealing with at the time. However, I make it a point to not respond to things like this, when I'm in a bad mood, cuz I'd probably take it out on an unsuspecting you did. I'm sorry my comment upset you, but you sort of upset me when you told me I was banned for something so innocent. Maybe if I had gone off on a swearing tangent your response could be justified, but I dont see it that way over this. I dont want to sound like a baby or anything, but it kind of hurt my feelings...especially since you're one of my fav writers...
CLshadow chapter 22 . 5/7/2009
please if you have time and inspiration, think about uploading another chapter of this story.

I really love it and I would like to see how it ends..

anyway good luck with writing further stories.

Fate chapter 23 . 5/6/2009
*grins and cackles like a maniac*

Wow... its been a few years since I last read this, and I'd just like to say that I enjoyed every minute I spent re-reading this story.

You have a wonderful way with words, and the way you have intergrated the character development and plot into the fic was absolutely wonderful to read. (I've been grining like a loon for the past few hours... ;D )

And now that I've found it again, I've put this story onto my email alerts, just in case the muse decides to tap dance acros your keyboard once more. ~smile~
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